Correction De Phrases

[somelia]

bonjour , pouvez vous verifier si j'ai fais des erreurs :

-she didn't eat fruit

-on Sunday , she ate more sweet product than on Thursday.

-She didn't drink enough water (although the coffee and the tea contain water, it is not sufficient )

-She should eat more dairy products

- On two days, she ate more products cerealiers than legumes

-On Tuesday, she ate a dairy product while on Saturday she didn't take it

-On Tuesday, she didn't eat meat while on Thursday she took it twice (chicken and ham)

-0n both days , She drank a lot of coffee and tea

-She ate as ceraliers products on Tuesday as on Mondays

-She ate less on Monday than on Tuesdays

j'espére que vous allez m'aider , c'est un devoir pour jeudi .

merci d'avance

[Jean B]

Bonjour,

Pouvez-vous vérifier si j'ai fait des erreurs ?

- She didn't eat fruit.

- On Sunday, she ate more sweet product than on Thursday.

- She didn't drink enough water (although the coffee and the tea contain water, it is not sufficient.

- She should eat more dairy products.

- Over two days, she ate more cereal products <cerealiers> than <legumes> vegetables.

- On Tuesday, she had <ate> a dairy product while on Saturday she didn't <take> have it.

- On Tuesday, she didn't <eat> have meat while on Thursday she <took it> had some twice (chicken and ham).

- 0n both days, she drank a lot of coffee and tea.

- She ate as many <ceraliers> cereal products on Tuesday as on Monday.

- She ate less on Monday than on Tuesday.

J'espère que vous allez m'aider, c'est un devoir pour jeudi.

merci d'avance

[somelia]

Tu sembles parfois oublier que le premier mot d'une phrase commence toujours par une majuscule et aussi bien en français qu'en anglais.

La virgule se met sans espace derrière le mot précédent, l'espace se met après.

Le point se met lui aussi sans espace après le dernier mot de la phrase.

Tâche de t'en souvenir et de l'appliquer. J'ai rectifié partout.

- Quelle était la consigne de cet exercice "curieux" ?

- Bien que ce ne soit pas faux, l'anglais emploie rarement le verbe "eat/ate/eaten" pour dire manger/consommer telle ou telle chose.

La plupart du temps, il emploie have/had.