Recipe Poem

[Dj-dj67]

Bonjour à tous,

Je dois faire un poème recette (ou une recette poème comme vous voulez).

J'aimerais bien me la faire corriger et avoir quelques avis (enfin pas trop nécessaire j'ai rien trouvé de super).

Enfin bref toute amélioration est la bienvenue

A strange lovely recipe.

Ingredients :

- Black food colouring.

- White food colouring.

- 1 L of generosity.

- 1 L of affection.

- understanding.

- honesty.

- Choose a number of hours to laugh.

- kindness.

- 10L of brotherhood.

- Choose some centers of interest; Here I'd choose Football, friends and girls.

- 10mL of disagreement.

To begin with, take a great container.

Put into it 140 kg of human modelling clay.

Knead it for 9 monts.

Separate in 2 equal heaps.

Let simmer for 8 years.

Then put into 2 smaller containers.

Add in each half liter of generosity and affection.

Let the clay grow-up, and learn some basical things.

Baste each mixture with half Liter of understanding and honesty.

Season with a pinch of disagreement.

The feelings begin to form.

Don't forget to fold in a jug of kindness.

Then stir vigorously.

Next, dredge with cheerfulness.

And the most important step, add gradually 10 kg of brotherhood in blending ardently.

Cut the mixture in 2 equal heaps again.

Now, baste one with the black food colouring and the other with the white food colouring.

Let them meeting and laughing for hours.

Make travel them in all aver France and Morocco.

GIve them some occupations like Football, friends and girls.

Hence there are going to play Football, to be sociable, flirting.

Meanwhile, bake them at low temperature for 7 years.

During the cooking, they will share their knowledge, emotions, sometimes they'll be disagree.

When time to cook is ended, serve with decoration.

You have succeeded in cooking the perfect and unbreakable frienship.

World is sometimes well made.

Note : The 2 personns look very different, but that difference make them closer.

[Jean B]

Réponse déjà donnée sur l'autre site.

[Dj-dj67]

Réponse déjà donnée sur l'autre site.

[Jean B]

Oui, merci encore

Donc si je comprends bien il n'y a que 1 prof d'anglais pour les 2 forums ?

Plus la peine que je poste sur les 2

:p

[yveslouis]

Oui, merci encore

Donc si je comprends bien il n'y a que 1 prof d'anglais pour les 2 forums ?

Plus la peine que je poste sur les 2

:p