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[Lauliipop]

Bonjour, ce serait super si une courageuse personne pouvait corriger les fautes de mon devoir et me proposer des expressions équivalentes à celles que j'ai mise en français Merci d'avance !

Sujet : What qualities does setting down in a foreign country requires.

Would you be ready to leave your homeland, your friends and your family in order to live abroad ?

People usually say that journeys are necessary for blossom, and I agree with them.

We must weigh the pros and cons but from my point of view, there are so many advantages to travel around the world that the question doesn’t have to be asked.

Firstly, I think that the qualities requires to settling down in a foreign country are numerous. For example, we must have the ability to adjust himself in a new environment. It’s very hard to change everything in a life. People have to be also very autonomous, independent and mature. They must have a strong character and don’t be afraid of the idea of leaving everything. I’m convinced that the taste of the adventure is a very good qualitie to live abroad.

Last but not least, people who want to settling down in a foreign country have to be aware that they will have to learn an other language and an other culture. In other words a difficult first year “les attend”. Little by little “le train de vie s’installe”.

I’d like to point of that a good standing financial is obliged to live abroad in good conditions.

When I’ll have a job, I must be ready to leave my homeland, my friends and my family in order to live abroad only if I have a good opportunity, otherwise it would be too difficult !

Personaly, I see that as a rewarding experience. Thanks to high technology, it is very easy to talk at the other end of the planet !

Furthermore, people must have to understand that it’s a gold opportunity to live abroad because it allows a great open mindedness. Try is the start of the success.

And I’m convinced that adventures, good or not, sustains conversations !

We may infer that live abroad have many positives sides and most of the time “on ressort grandit” of this experience.

In a nutshell, “les voyages forgent le caractère”.

[Lauliipop]

C'est pour vendredi 25

[Jean B]

Bonjour,

People usually say that "travel broadens the mind", and I agree with them.

We must weigh the pros and cons but from my point of view, there are so many advantages to travel around the world that the question doesn't have to be asked.

Firstly, I think that many qualities are required to settle down in a foreign country. For example, we must have the ability to adjust in a new environment. It's very hard to change everything in one's life. People have to be also very autonomous, independent and mature. They must have a strong character and not be afraid of the idea of leaving everything. I'm convinced that the spirit of adventure is a very good quality to live abroad.

Last but not least, people who want to settle down in a foreign country have to be aware that they will have to learn another language and another culture. In other words a difficult first year is awaiting them. Little by little the daily routine organizes.

I'd like to point out that having the means is necessary to live abroad in good conditions.<(Je te laisse volontiers la responsabilité de cette affirmation !)

When I have a job, I shall have to be ready to leave my homeland, my friends and my family in order to live abroad only if I have a good opportunity, otherwise it would be too difficult!

Personally, I see that as a rewarding experience. Thanks to high technology, it is very easy to talk with people from the other part of the planet!

Furthermore, people must have to understand that it's a gold opportunity to live abroad because it allows a great open-mindedness. Trying is the start of success.

And I'm convinced that adventure, good or not, keeps up/sustains conversations!

We may infer that living abroad has many positive sides and most of the time we grow in wisdom from this experience.

In a nutshell, travelling forms one's character.

* Trop de fautes grossières. Si tu continues comme ça, tu vas droit dans le mur et ça risque de faire mal !

L'anglais, c'est comme tout le reste. Il y a des notions à apprendre, à savoir et à appliquer.

Un seul exemple : to settling down... Faut le faire ...!

A bon entendeur...

PS Je te signale que vendredi c'est le 26, pas le 25. Vérifie ton calendrier.

[Lauliipop]

Merci beaucoup !