Expression écrite

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Bonjour,

Pourriez-vs svp me corriger les fautes d’orthographe et de grammaire de cette expression écrite.

Merci d’avance.

Expression écrite :

To be unemployed person means to be poor and it does not make easier life. The poor people can’t meet their material needs and can’t even nourish their family. Some people prefer staying in poverty and accepting the small sum of silver given by the State to live. Others prefer ameliorating their life and no more living in poverty, for it they are ready to make anything to arrive there. Among these people, the majority derive. In effect, they are ready to steal, to kill, to be part of gangs, to make most abominable of the crimes and all that to earn some silver to go out of misery and live an easier life. Therefore we can say that unemployment drives to crime.

It’s true that unemployment can push people to make crimes but it’s not the best resolution to survive. In my view, people who choose this resolution it’s people who prefer easiness. Because in spite of the problemes which they have or in spite of their very low living standard, crime remains something very serious.

The State is responsible for a party of these crimes made by these poor unemployed persons because it can help them financially to raise their living standard. But responsibility rests especially on them because the State didn’t force them to make these crimes. It’s only because they didn’t succeed in controlling their feeling of injustice that took it out from the right way.

In finale, we can say that unemployment is one of the greatest causes of crime but there is always a more honorable resolution to ameliorate the living standard of these poor unemployed persons.