Correction Fautes English

[bzoin-aide-math]

Bonjour je cherche quequ'un qui se sent capable de corriger mes fautes d'Anglais pour l'info j'ai chaque fois mit ce que je voulais dire en français pour que vous compreniez mieux .

Un grand merci d'anvance :S

[thebestfriends]

Bonjour je cherche quequ'un qui se sent capable de corriger mes fautes d'Anglais pour l'info j'ai chaque fois mit ce que je voulais dire en français pour que vous compreniez mieux .

Un grand merci d'anvance :S

[imaginary-lie]

Texte 1 :

Ross is 16 years old. He receives an allowance of 30£ of his parents every month provided that it arranges its room. He wants a greater allowance but for this, he must mow the garden or clean the car and his parents will give him more money.

Any study revealed that materialism has had a devastating effect on the attitudes of British teenagers. The study showed that boys, for example, are feared that everybody else laugh by their if they admitted to doing voluntary work, as work with charities.

(J'ai fait deux trois modif', jpense pas avoir fait trop de fautes --', dis-moi t'as pris un traducteur sur internet pour fair sa ?)

Texte 2 :

Ross wears a lined tee-shirt. He has a watch at the wrist . He has long blond hair. His room is not very clean. On the desk, there are a radio, a player for CD, a playstation, a TV which is switch on and a lamp. Under the desk, there are so many computer games. There are so many posters sticked on the wall. If he didn’t receive any pocket money, he wouldn’t have so many things into his room.

Texte 3 :

When we are coming on my room, the desk is on the right of the entry. My wardrobe is on the left. At the left side of my wardrobe, so by the side of the door, there's a davit. And to the other side there is a cupboard. On this side, there is a door which leads to the room of my grand sister who doesnt live with us any more. Then, at the right, there's my bed, and behind it, there's any little table. At the opposed side of my wardrobe, there's a window and at the right of this window, we can find the radiator. And then at the last wall, there is cupboard with my radio on the top. At the right of their, there is a rack with so many books. In front of this rack, a small armchair. And I cant forget that there are everywhere, some frameworks and decorations in relation with the sea because my tapestry is blue like ocean.

Texte 4 :

If I had the room of my dreams, it would be very big. There would have a computer and a TV.

I would have a bed for two. A wardrobe with so much clothes of quality. There would have a bathroom integrated with shower and bath. If I could it, I would pay any beauty specialist who will makes me beautiful. There would have a pub where I could invite friends to come to make fun. I would pay a cleaning lady, of course, but a coach too, for make me sport.

Texte 5 :

I receive between 5 and 10 euros per week by my parents. I belive that you, you don't really receive much money. If I were you, I would work as a student during the summer holidays. If you want I know a woman who is managing of a clothes shop, it's precisely a student that she wants. It's astonishing that your parents don't give you more money like mine when I wash the car or when I clean the house. For my birthday I receive money of my godfather, my godmother land my grandparents. This summer I want to work with the academy of summer which will proceed in my school during 3 weeks. I would put this money on my account at the bank for have money later.

bon sur 10 textes je t'en ai traduit 5, j'y ai passé pas mal de temps, mais je pense que tu t'es pas beaucoup foulé, tu as pris un traducteur, donc en gros tu n'as rien fait du tout, bonne chance pour la suite.