Expression En Anglais

[all-sar]

bonjour,

voila, besoin d'aide pr corriger les fautes de cette expression écrite.

merci pr l'aide.

Today, the world has a lot of progress and communication plays a crucial role in our life. Means of communication are many and various. There are fixed telephone, mobile, internet, letter, fax, television, newspapers, radio and communication face-to-face.

Personnaly, my means of communication is especially internet because it is the most developed and the most effective. Internet allows to transmit information to a large number of individuals. Indeed, the information is watched by the world at the second when it is placed on the net.

Besides, I prefer Internet because we can communicate while watching the person, even if the distance is enormous. And we can initiate a conversation with several persons at the same time.

I also prefer mobile because it is small and wireless, which allows us to communicate anytime and anywhere.

All these means of communications are useful today because they can transmit a informatuion in the world and this helps us a lot in case of emergency.

[Jean B]

Bonjour,

Today, the world has made a lot of progress and communication plays a crucial role in our lives. <(pluriel idiomatique) Means of communication are many and various. There are <fixed> landline telephone, mobile phone, Internet, letter, fax, television, newspapers, radio and communication face-to-face.

Personally, my means of communication is especially Internet because it is the most developed and the most effective. Internet <allows> makes it possible to transmit information to a large number of individuals. Indeed, the information is watched by the world at the second when it is placed on the net.

Besides, I prefer Internet because we can communicate while watching the person, even if the distance is enormous. And we can initiate a conversation with several <persons> people at the same time.

I also prefer a mobile phone because it is small and wireless, which allows us to communicate anytime (and) anywhere.

All these means of communication<s> are useful today because they can transmit <a> information <in> throughout the world and this helps us a lot in case of emergency.

Good job!

PS Peut-on savoir pour quelle(s) raison(s) tu as cru bon de changer de pseudo ?

[all-sar]

merci pr votre aide.

enfait j'ai changé de pseudo car l'espace des fichiers-joints est rempli dc en changeant de pseudo, sa me permet d'avoir un espace vide pr envoyer des fichiers-joints.

voila.a+

[Jean B]

merci pr votre aide.

enfait j'ai changé de pseudo car l'espace des fichiers-joints est rempli dc en changeant de pseudo, sa me permet d'avoir un espace vide pr envoyer des fichiers-joints.

voila.a+