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[Allezlelosc_59]

Bonjour,

J'ai pour mardi un brouillon de couverture de livre à réaliser. Le livre doit porter sur le thème de l'horreur et je dois réaliser entre 150 et 200 mots. Voici ce que ça donne, merci de me dire les modifications à effectuer :

Front :

MY HEADMASTER IS A KILLER

Written by Bobbo the Squirrel, elected best writter of 2008

"A gripping horror story", The New York Times

Back

A simple meeting between a headmaster and a pupil's parents... An argument... A knife in the drawer's desk... First murder. My headmaster is a serial killer ! After parents, he will attack...his pupils ! "They can't leave school ! Ahahahaha ! I love pupil's blood !" Who will stop the headmaster ? How many pupils will be killed ? What will the parents do ? Read the book and enjoy !

"I have never read a more thundering book of my life" Catthy Letty - Sunday Telegraph

"If I were in a desert island, I'd take "My Headmaster is a Killer", an unexpected book." Niklas Legg - The New York Times

"What exciting story ! Bobbo the Squirrel is the reference in horror stories." Mark Tudor - London Evening Standard

Penguin Fiction - 20 pounds

Merci d'avance pour votre aide, bon week-end

[Jean B]

Bonjour,

Front cover:

MY HEADMASTER IS A KILLER

Written by Bob the Squirrel, elected best writer of 2008.

"A gripping horror story", The New York Times.

Back cover:

A simple meeting between a headmaster and a pupil's parents... An argument... A knife in the desk drawer (*)... First murder. My headmaster is a serial killer! After the parents, he will attack...his pupils! "They can't leave school! Ahahahaha! I love pupils' blood!" Who will stop the headmaster? How many pupils will be killed? What will the parents do? Enjoy reading the book!

"I have never read a more thundering book in my life", Cathy Letty - The Sunday Telegraph.

"If I were in a desert island, I'd take "My Headmaster is a Killer", an unexpected book." Nicolas Legg - The New York Times.

"What an exciting story! Bob the Squirrel is the reference in horror stories." Mark Tudor – The London Evening Standard.

Penguin Fiction - £20

(*) Dans un nom composé de nom + nom, le nom noyau se place après. C'est-à-dire que celui des 2 qui joue le rôle de qualificatif se place avant.

Ponctuation : contrairement au français, les points d'exclamation et d'interrogation se soudent au dernier mot de la phrase, sans espace.

C'est du bon boulot et vive les Ch'tis !

Have a nice Easter weekend.

[Allezlelosc_59]

Merci beaucoup, très sympa, bon week-end

[Jean B]

Merci beaucoup, très sympa, bon week-end