zivalouna Posté(e) le 3 mars 2008 Signaler Posté(e) le 3 mars 2008 Bonjour pourriez-vous me corriger mes fautes Svp? Hello, Mr. Smith, let me join you and World Vision is a member of this organization I would like to ask you a few questions: 1 - We know that your organization is a non-governmental at'elle other characteristics? Yes, our organization is also Christian you. 2-When a jerk founded? - 1950 3-Some organizations have specific currencies, it did in one or more? We do that which is: "Our vision for every child, life in all its fullness; Our prayer for every heart, the will to make it so. " 4 - The organization is it independent? We are in partnership with UNICEF, WHO (World Health Organization) and the ILO (International Labour Organisation). 5 - The members composing the organization are there many? Yes, we expect today 23000 employees and 220000 volunteers. 6-You work for power raised funds for the protection of children what is your business? We are the first NGO to sponsor children in the world, as a result today we expect fifteen million children sponsored, World Vision prefers transmit skills rather than material goods, to enable beneficiaries to become self - . 7-Your activities also extend to the level of development, can tell you a little more? In assistance to sustainable development, World Vision contributes its expertise in 4 main areas: access to drinking water, food, education and health. 8-In what other areas you intervene? We also, in the field of emergency, we are the first distributor of the World Food Programme of the United Nations. 9-In the long term, what is your goal? World Vision wants to educate the public and policymakers on specific topics relating to the rights of children and women, to the AIDS epidemic, or even to the reconciliation between peoples: child soldiers, education for disabled children children orphaned by AIDS, seeking generic drugs ... 10-Did you collect large sums from the inception of the organization? In 2005, World Vision has raised 1.53 billion euros. Merci d'avance! A bientôt!
E-Bahut yveslouis Posté(e) le 3 mars 2008 E-Bahut Signaler Posté(e) le 3 mars 2008 Ton travail manque de rigueur. La forme interrogative devrait être sue. Il ne faut pas écrire comme on parle, surtout en anglais ! Bonjour pourriez-vous me corriger mes fautes Svp? Hello, Mr. Smith, let me join you and (Construction de la phrase ?) World Vision is a member of this organization (Et si tu mettais un point ?) I would like to ask you a few questions: 1 - We know that your organization is a non-governmental at'elle (Ça sens la traduction automatique !) WHAT other characteristics HAS IT GOT? Yes, our organization is also Christian you (Que vient faire ce "you" ?) . 2-When a jerk founded? (Revois la construction de la forme interrogative. Le sujet est-il "jerk" = "secousse"?) - 1950 3-Some organizations have specific currencies, it did in one or more (???)? We do that which is: "Our vision for every child, life in all its fullness; Our prayer for every heart, the will to make it so. " 4 - The organization is it independent? (Revois la construction de la forme interrogative. ) We are in partnership with UNICEF, WHO (World Health Organization) and the ILO (International Labour Organisation). 5 - The members composing the organization are there many? (Revois la construction de la forme interrogative. ) Yes, we expect today 23000 employees and 220000 volunteers. 6-You work for power raised funds for the protection of children what is your business? We are the first NGO to sponsor children in the world, as a result today we expect fifteen million children sponsored, World Vision prefers transmitTING skills rather than material goods, to enable beneficiaries to become self-sufficient . 7-Your activities also extend to the level of development, can YOU tell <you> US a little more? In assistance to sustainable development, World Vision contributes its expertise in 4 main areas : access to drinking water, food, education and health. 8-In what other areas DO you intervene? We also, in the field of emergency, we are (Phrase mal construite.) the first distributor of the World Food Programme of the United Nations. 9-In the long term, what is your goal? (Bien) World Vision wants to educate the public and policymakers on specific topics relating to the rights of children and women, to the AIDS epidemic, or even to <the> reconciliation between peoples: child soldiers, education for disabled children children orphaned by AIDS, seeking generic drugs ... 10-Did you collect large sums from the inception (???) of the organization? In 2005, World Vision has raised 1.53 billion euros.
zivalouna Posté(e) le 4 mars 2008 Auteur Signaler Posté(e) le 4 mars 2008 Je ne voudrais pas abuser mais j'ai apporté avec votre aide des corrections mais je sais qu'il y a encore des fautes notamment au niveau des questions et comme c'est pour demain, pourriez vous de nouveau me corriger svp? Hello, Mr. Smith, I would like to join World Vision. You are a member of this organization; it’s why I would like to ask you a few questions: 1 - We know that your organization is a non-governmental what other characteristics has it got? Yes, our organization is also Christian and international. 2-When has it been create? - 1950 3-Some organizations have specific slogan, what is yours? We do that which is: "Our vision for every child, life in all its fullness; Our prayer for every heart, the will to make it so." 4 – Is an organization independent? - We are in partnership with UNICEF, WHO (World Health Organization) and the ILO (International Labour Organisation). 5 – Are there a lot of people who work in this organization? Yes, we expect today 23000 employees and 220000 volunteers. 6-You work for power raised funds for the protection of children what is your business? We are the first NGO to sponsor children in the world, as a result today we expect fifteen million children sponsored. World Vision prefers transmitting skills rather than material goods, to enable beneficiaries to become self-sufficient. 7-Your activities also extend to the level of development, can you tell us a little more? In assistance to sustainable development, World Vision contributes its expertise in 4 main areas: access to drinking water, food, education and health. 8-In what other areas do you intervene? We also, World Vision is the first distributor of the World Food Programme of the United Nations, in the field of emergency. 9-In the long term, what is your goal? World Vision wants to educate the public and policymakers on specific topics relating to the rights of children and women, to the AIDS epidemic, or even to reconciliation between peoples: child soldiers, education for disabled children orphaned by AIDS, seeking generic drugs ... 10-Did you collect large sums from the creation of the organization? In 2005, World Vision has raised 1.53 billion euros. Merci d'avance!
E-Bahut yveslouis Posté(e) le 4 mars 2008 E-Bahut Signaler Posté(e) le 4 mars 2008 Hello, Mr. Smith, I would like to join World Vision. You are a member of this organization; <it’s> THAT'S why I would like to ask you a few questions: 1 - We know that your organization is <a> non-governmental. What other characteristics has it got? Yes, our organization is also Christian and international. (Tu ne dois pas répondre par "Yes" à une question commençant par un "Wh") 2-When has it been createD/ WHEN WAS IT CREATED? - 1950 (Un peu bref comme réponses ! ) 3-Some organizations have specific slogan, what is yours? We do that which is (???): "Our vision for every child, life in all its fullness; Our prayer for every heart, the will to make it so." 4 – Is IT an INDEPENDENT organization <independent>? - We are in partnership with UNICEF, WHO (World Health Organization) and the ILO (International Labour Organisation). 5 – <Are there> DO a lot of people <who> work in this organization? Yes, we expect today 23,000 employees and 220,000 volunteers. 6-You work for power raised funds (???) for the protection of children (Commence une nouvelle phrase ! ) what is your business? We are the first NGO to sponsor children in the world, as a result today we expect fifteen million children sponsored. World Vision prefers transmitting skills rather than material goods, to enable beneficiaries to become self-sufficient. 7-Your activities also extend to the level of development, can you tell us a little more? In assistance to sustainable development, World Vision contributes its expertise in 4 main areas: access to drinking water, food, education and health. 8-In what other areas do you intervene? We also, (À quoi sert ce début de phrase ?) World Vision is the first distributor of the World Food Programme of the United Nations, in the field of emergency. 9-In the long term, what is your goal? World Vision wants to educate the public and policymakers on specific topics relating to the rights of children and women, to the AIDS epidemic, or even to reconciliation between peoples: child soldiers, education for disabled children orphaned by AIDS, seeking generic drugs ... 10-<Did you collect large sums from > HAVE YOU COLLECTED A LOT OF MONEY SINCE the creation of the organization? In 2005, World Vision has raised 1.53 billion euros.
zivalouna Posté(e) le 5 mars 2008 Auteur Signaler Posté(e) le 5 mars 2008 Merci encore!!! Euh... pour le centrage du texte c'était pas fait exprès... A bientôt!
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