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[banane00712]

Coucou à vous tous, voilà j'ai fais un petit exposé en anglais sur l'arche de Zoé. Mais je pense qu'il y a beaucoup de fautes. J'aimerai que vous me corrigiez svp! Merci d'avance!

Voilà la première partie:

Zoé's Ark is a French charity organization with the aim of increasing awareness of the crisis in Darfur and providing aid for children affected by the conflict. The justice of this country condemns then the main members for the hard labours. The president of the Chad Idriss Déby Itno and the president of France Nicolas Sarkozy will intervene.

Zoé's Ark was founded in 2005 by volunteer fireman Éric Breteau, former president of the French 4x4 Federation, who named it after a girl orphaned by the December 2004 Asian tsunami. The group, registered as a non-governmental organization with the French authorities, sought to aid children affected by the tsunami. She spreads her activities in Sudan and in the Chad in 2007, through "Opération Darfour" (Children Rescue).

Actions in Indonesia:

In Indonesia, the operation " Portfolios for Children " aim at giving to more than 100 000 children of the region the possibility of reaching places of culture, intellectual enrichment and blooming.

The Chadian affair:

The project of the association:

The " Operation Darfour on 2007 " aim at collecting gifts and at organizing the evacuation of children of less than five years orphans (up to ten thousand), so that families adopt them against an average 1490€.

Qui veut dire:

La justice de ce pays condamne alors les principaux membres aux travaux forcés. Le président du Tchad Idriss Déby Itno et le président de la France Nicolas Sarkozy interviendront.

Zoé's l'Arche a été fondé en 2005 par le pompier de volontaire Éric Breteau, l'ancien président du français 4x4 la Fédération, qui l'a nommé après une fille restée orphelin par le tsunami d'Asiatique de Décembre 2004. Le groupe, enregistré comme une organisation non gouvernementale avec les autorités françaises, cherchées pour aider des enfants affectés par le tsunami. Elle étend ses activités au Soudan et au Tchad en 2007, au travers de l'« Opération Darfour »,

Actions en Indonésie :

En Indonésie, l'opération « Books for Children » vise à donner à plus de 100 000 enfants de la région la possibilité d'accéder à des lieux de culture, d'enrichissement intellectuel et d'épanouissement.

L'affaire tchadienne

Le projet de l’association :

L'« Opération Darfour 2007 » vise à collecter des dons et à organiser l'évacuation d'enfants de moins de cinq ans orphelins (jusqu'à dix mille), pour que des familles les adoptent contre un don moyen de 1490 €.

[yveslouis]

Zoé's Ark is a French charity organization with the aim of increasing awareness of the crisis in Darfur and providing aid for children affected by the conflict.

THEN <The> the justice of this country condemns <then> the main members <for the > TO hard labour<s>. The president of <the> Chad, Idriss Déby Itno and the president of France, Nicolas Sarkozy, will intervene.

Zoé's Ark was founded in 2005 by volunteer fireman Éric Breteau, former president of the French 4x4 Federation, who named it after a girl orphaned by the December 2004 Asian tsunami. The group, registered as a non-governmental organization with the French authorities, sought to aid children affected by the tsunami. <She> IT spread<s> <her> ITS activities in Sudan and in <the> Chad in 2007, through THE "Opération Darfour" (Children Rescue).

Actions in Indonesia:

In Indonesia, the operation " Portfolios for Children " aimS at giving THE POSSIBILITY OF REACHING PLACES OF CULTURE, INTELLECTUAL ENRICHMENT AND BLOOMING to more than 100,000 children of the region <the possibility of reaching places of culture, intellectual enrichment and blooming>.

The Chadian affair:

The project of the association:

The " Operation Darfour on 2007 " aimS at collecting gifts and (at) organizing the evacuation of ORPHAN children <of less than> UNDER five <years> <orphans> (up to ten thousand OF THEM), so that families MAY adopt them against/FOR an average OF €1,490.

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[banane00712]

Merci beaucoup!!!! Par contre j'ai encore une grosse partie qui n'est pas corriger! J'aurai encore besoin de votre aide svp! Voilà un petit paragraphe!

J'espère que vous m'aidrez à nouveau!

Progress of the operation:

At least a part of the relatives of the concerned children received from false information on the objective of the project. The members of the association the Arc of Zoé are accused of having known that it was not about orphans, but these deny him. October 25th, 2007, volunteers, people in charge of the association, members of Spanish equipage of the plane are stopped by the authorities while they had to leave Chad with hundred and three children. They are suspected of kidnapping of children. The Chadian president, Idriss Déby, asserts that the concerned children are not orphans. The association evokes an operation intended to evacuate towards Europe the children orphans of the Darfour, the victims of the civil war.

All in all, the president of the association Éric Breteau and his partner Émilie Lelouch, Philippe Van Winkelberg, Alain Peligat, Dominique Aubry, Nadia Mérimi, the journalist Marie Agnès Peleran, as well as two other journalists who accompanied them, seven Spaniards and two Chadians, are put in detention to Abéché (an east city Chadian).

[banane00712]

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[Jean B]

Bonjour,

Je prends le relais.

Corrections et ajouts balisés en majuscules.

Supprimer ce qui est entre <...>.

Progress of the operation:

At least a part of the relatives of the concerned children received <from> false information on the objective of the project. The members of <the association> the ArK of Zoé ASSOCIATION WERE accused of having known that it was not about orphans, but theY denIED <him> IT. October 25th, 2007, volunteers, people in charge of the association, members of THE Spanish CREW <equipage> of the plane WERE <stopped> ARRESTED by the authorities <while> AS they <had> WERE to leave Chad with ONE hundred and three children. They WERE suspected of kidnapping <of> THE children. The Chadian president, Idriss Déby, assertED that the concerned children WERE not orphans. The association evokeD an operation intended to evacuate the ORPHANED children, the victims of the civil war, FROM DARFUR towards Europe. <the children orphans of the Darfour, the victims of the civil war.>

All in all, the president of the association Éric Breteau and his partner Émilie Lelouch, Philippe Van Winkelberg, Alain Peligat, Dominique Aubry, Nadia Mérimi, the journalist Marie Agnès Peleran, as well as two other journalists who accompanied them, seven Spaniards and two Chadians, <are put in detention to> WERE IMPRISONED IN Abéché (an east <city> Chadian CITY).

=> Même si elle est récente, cette triste affaire est passée, terminée et datée, ce qui entraine obligatoirement l'emploi du preterit.

Penses-y pour la suite.

[banane00712]

Merci beaucoup de votre aide! Malheureusement, j'ai encore besoin de vous!

J'ai encore deux parties! Voilà la première!

The media are quickly interested in this affair. She becomes also political. On October 30th, 2007, new French people are charged with removal of minors and with swindle, whereas seven Spaniards are charged with complicity of kidnapping.

On October 31st, 2007, Jacques Wilmart, Belgian airline pilot having transported between the tchado-Sudanese border and Abéché a part of 103 children, is charged and imprisoned.

On November 3rd, 2007, Nicolas Sarkozy goes to the Chad. The same day, the Chadian justice frees three French journalists and four Spanish hostesses. They are returned in them respective countries.

November 9th, 2007, three Spaniards and Belgian pilot who were charged with complicity with The Arc of Zoé are released.

Le procès tchadien:

The lawsuit began on December 21st, 2007 in front of the criminal Court of N'Djamena. The verdict returned by the court of justice December 26th, 2007 condemns six members of the association in eight years of prison with hard labours and for a pecuniary 6,5 million euro condemnation.

Ce qui veut dire:

Les médias s’intéressent rapidement à cette affaire. Elle devient également politique. Le 30 octobre 2007, les neuf Français sont inculpés d'enlèvement de mineurs et d'escroquerie, tandis que les sept Espagnols sont inculpés de complicité d'enlèvement.

Le 31 octobre 2007, Jacques Wilmart, pilote d'avion belge ayant transporté entre la frontière tchado-soudanaise et Abéché une partie des 103 enfants, est inculpé et écroué.

Le 3 novembre 2007, Nicolas Sarkozy se rend au Tchad. Ce même jour, la justice tchadienne libère les trois journalistes français et les quatre hôtesses espagnoles. Ils sont ramenés dans leur pays respectifs.

Le 9 novembre 2007, les trois Espagnols et le pilote belge qui étaient inculpés de complicité avec L'Arche de Zoé sont remis en liberté.

The Chadian lawsuit :

Le procès a débuté le 21 décembre 2007 devant la Cour criminelle de N'Djamena. Le verdict rendu par la cour de justice le 26 décembre 2007 condamne les six membres de l'association à huit ans de prison avec des travaux forcés et à une condamnation pécuniaire de 6,5 millions d'euros.

[banane00712]

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[Jean B]

The media <are> WERE quickly interested in this <affair> ISSUE. <She> IT ALSO becAme<s also> political. On October 30th 2007, new French people <are> WERE charged with removal of minors and with swindle, whereas seven Spaniards <are> WERE charged with complicity of kidnapping.

On October 31st 2007, Jacques Wilmart, THE Belgian airline pilot having transported a part of 103 children between the Chado-Sudanese border and Abéché, <is> WAS charged and imprisoned.

On November 3rd 2007, Nicolas Sarkozy <goes> WENT to <the> Chad. The same day, the Chad<ian> justice freeD three French journalists and four Spanish hostesses. They <are> WERE returned <in> TO the<m>IR respective countries.

ON November 9th 2007, three Spaniards and THE Belgian pilot who were charged with complicity with The ArK of Zoé <are> WERE released.

THE CHAD TRIAL:

The lawsuit began on December 21st, 2007 in front of the criminal Court of N'Djamena. The verdict returned by the court of justice ON December 26th, 2007 condemnED six members of the association <in> TO eight years of prison with hard labour<s> and <for a <pecuniary> 6,5 million euroS <condemnation> DAMAGES.

*=> RAPPEL : action passée, terminée, datée = preterit.

Faute de rectification de ta part, je m'abstiendrai désormais de le faire à ta place.

[banane00712]

Merci encore, et si j'avais rectifié mais le message a été supprimé!

[banane00712]

J'ose poster le dernier paragraphe! MDR ! J'espère que tu m'aidras une dernière fois! J'ai corrigé ce que tu m'avais dis, enfin j'espère que j'en ai pas oublié!

The return in France:

On December 28th, 2007, has 9:10 pm, they were repatriated in France, has the airport of Bourget. During the audience on January 28th, 2008, the magistrates' court of Créteil determined height years of imprisonment as punishment equivalent to eight years of hard labour in which they were condemned in the Chad.

This association made many unfortunates. Notably the French families which thought of receiving a child, as well as child Chadian who thought they could study, but also the relatives of the Chadian who were wanted that their child went at school. In addition this association with fact lose a lot of money, because of the lawsuits, the repatriations.

Ce qui veut dire:

Le retour en France :

Le 28 décembre 2007, a 21h10, ils sont rapatriés en France, a l'aéroport du Bourget. Lors de l'audience du 28 janvier 2008, le tribunal correctionnel de Créteil a déterminé 8 années de prison ferme comme peine équivalente aux huit ans de travaux forcés auxquels ils ont été condamnés au Tchad.

Cette association a fait beaucoup de malheureux. Notamment les familles Françaises qui pensaient recevoir un enfant, ainsi que les enfant tchadiens qui pensaient pouvoir étudier, mais aussi les parents des tchadiens qui voulaient que leur enfant aillent à l’école. De plus cette association à fait perdre beaucoup d’argent, à cause des procès, des rapatriements….

Et si vous avez des informations à me faire ajouter à mon exposé, n'hésitez à m'en faire part merci!!!

[McFLY27]

The return TO France:

On December 28th, 2007, AT 9:10 pm, they were repatriated in France, AT the airport of Bourget. During the audience OF January 28th, 2008, the magistrates' court of Créteil détermine (es-tu sure que ça se dit?) EIGHT years of custodial sentence

as AN EQUIVALENT punishment WITH THE eight years of FORCES labour TO which they were condemned in <pas besoin de THE> Chad.

This association made many MIS FORTUNES (unfortunates veut dire pauvres). IN PARTICULAR the French families which thought THEY COULD ADOPT a child, THUS the Chadian children who though they could study, but also TO the chiliennes parents who wanted that their child went TO school. FURTHERMORE this association made a big loss of money (pas trop sur de ça mais bon…) because of the lawsuits and the repatriations.

voila un corrigé de ta partie, je crois que j'ai tout fait...je ne te garantie pas un 18 non plus, mais c'est déjà mieux que les traduction litterales que tu avait fait.

attention avec ce genre de trucs sur internet (systran, babelfish,...) c'est bien pour un mot, mais pas pour des phrases entiers. ils ne tiennent pas compte de l'ordre des mots ou traduisent mal parce que il y a trop de mots....enfin, utilise ces trucs comme un dictionnaire, pour un mot, mais pas pour tout un exposé!

bonne chance pour l'exposé!

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[banane00712]

D'accord! Merci beaucoup en tout cas! Par contre je n'ai pas compris pourquoi tu mettais chiliennes dans: "but also TO the chiliennes parents who wanted that their child went TO school. "

[banane00712]

Et j'ai une autre question, est-ce que cette phrase est juste?

In addition this association makes question the adoption abroad.

Merci d'avance!

[Jean B]

Et j'ai une autre question, est-ce que cette phrase est juste?

In addition this association makes question the adoption abroad.

Merci d'avance!

[Jean B]

D'accord! Merci beaucoup en tout cas! Par contre je n'ai pas compris pourquoi tu mettais chiliennes dans: "but also TO the chiliennes parents who wanted that their child went TO school. "

[banane00712]

Je peux mettre quoi à la place de la phrase qui ne veut rien dire???

[Jean B]

The return <in> TO France

On December 28th, 2007, <has> AT 9:10 pm, they were repatriated <in> TO France, <has> AT the <airport of> Bourget AIRPORT. During the audience on January 28th, 2008, the magistrates' court of Créteil determined <h>eight years of imprisonment as A punishment equivalent to eight years of hard labour <in> TO which they were condemned in <the> Chad.

This association made many unfortunates. Notably the French families <which> WHO thought of receiving a child, as well as <child> Chad<ian> CHILDREN who thought they could study, but also theIR relatives <of the Chadian> who <were> wanted <that> their childREN <went at> TO GO TO school. In addition this association <with fact> ACTUALLY losT a lot of money, because of the lawsuits, the repatriations.

=> Il est évident (rien qu'en voyant "à" traduit par "has") que tout ceci n'est que le résultat d'un traducteur en ligne.

C'est faire injure à tous les bénévoles de tous les sites que tu fréquentes et ce n'est pas en agissant ainsi que tu pourras faire le moindre progrès en anglais.

Ceci dit amicalement et sans aucune agressivité.

[banane00712]

Oui c'est je me suis aidé d'un traducteur automatique. En tout cas je vous remercie tous énormément pour votre aide! Désolé de vous avoir pris du temps!

[Jean B]

Oui c'est je me suis aidé d'un traducteur automatique. En tout cas je vous remercie tous énormément pour votre aide! Désolé de vous avoir pris du temps!

[McFLY27]

en effet...pourquoi j'ai mis chillien...

vive les corrections automatiques...

bon je corrige...

but also TOWARDS the children's parents who wanted to let their child going to school "

voila normallement c bon...;et le reste aussi...

bien sur ma traduction n'est pas la seule yen a toujours 2-3 de possibles, mais la mienne n'est surement pas fausse (vive les copains anglophones....=])

donc voila....

m... pour ton exposé!

[yveslouis]

Bonjour.

J'aurais plutôt écrit :"...let their CHILDREN GO to school."

What do you think?