Devoir Maison D'anglais

[B!B!]

Bonjour, je suis en Première S.

J'ai un dialogue d'anglais (pas très difficile) à rendre mardi, cependant j'aimerais savoir les erreurs que j'ai commise dans celui-ci.

Merci d'avance ...

[bryan] : “ Hello, what is your name and where do you come from?

[John] : “My name is John and here my sister Kitty. Before we lived in

California. And you what is your name and who are you ?

[bryan] : “My name is Bryan and here my brother Harry and my friend Sandy.

We are your neighbours.

[sandy] : “Wow, Your cat is beautiful ! “.

[Kitty] : “Thank's, he has 2 years and his name is “Smiley”. And you Bryan

what is the name of your dog ?

[bryan] : “Her name is “gingerbread”. It is a girl, and she has 3 months.

[John] : “Hey Harry, you have a baseball uniform. I love this sport ! Look my

new glove, it is that of the New-Jersey club, my favourite team.

[Harry] : “ Wow, you have a very beautiful glove ! I love baseball too.

[bryan] : “If you want, we can make you visit the quarter, and next you will

meet our friends with which we shall play a match of baseball. “

[sandy] : “Hey, Kitty, if you want you can come to play at home during the boy

playing baseball. ”

[Kitty] : “Ok thank you, I'm going to ask for the permission to my parents .”

[Jean B]

Bonjour,

Corrections et ajouts en majuscules.

Supprimer ce qui est en rouge entre <...>.

[bryan] : " Hello, what is your name and where do you come from?

[John] : "My name is John and here IS(voici = here is/are) my sister Kitty. <Before> we lived in

California BEFORE. And you what is your name and who are you?

[bryan] : "My name is Bryan and here IS(idem) my brother Harry and my friend Sandy.

We are your neighbours.

[sandy] : "Wow, Your cat is beautiful ! ".

[Kitty] : "Thank's, he <has> IS(jamais have pour l'âge) 2 years OLD and his name is "Smiley". And you Bryan what is the name of your dog?

[bryan] : "Her name is "Gingerbread".(majuscule au nom propre) It is a girl, and she <has> IS(idem) 3 months OLD.

[John] : "Hey Harry, you have a baseball uniform. I love this sport ! Look AT my new glove, it is that of the New-Jersey club, my favourite team.

[Harry] : " Wow, you have a very beautiful glove ! I love baseball too.

[bryan] : "If you want, we can make you visit the <quarter> DISTRICT, and next you will

meet our friends with <which> WHOM(antécédent = des personnes) we shall play a <match of> baseball MATCH(nom composé). "

[sandy] : "Hey, Kitty, if you want you can come to play at home <during> WHILE(= pendant que) the boyS ARE playing baseball. "

[Kitty] : "Ok thank you, I'm going to ask <for the> permission to my parents ."

[B!B!]

Merci beaucoup pour cette correction ! ! !

A bientot !

[Jean B]

Merci beaucoup pour cette correction ! ! !

A bientot !