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[diamant007]

salut tous le monde!

voila j'ai écrit un texte est j'aimerais bien que le me l'on verifie car je ne sais jamais quel temps utilisée je me trompe souvant.

Voila mon texte:

"hi mrs Harry, then the inquiry advances" he cried it hs high voice

"Ah hello Mr Potter, yes really I think of credit to find th reason of death of Mrs harter.I had some proof which me they make say" he says one of aerie sure of him

" What is it" he asked

" Scientific police finding fingerprints on themurder weapon, nepheu's of Mrs harter. Maybe that chales was badly erased fingerprints.So I think Mrs Harter is suicid not know but she would kill his nephew" he says pround of him.

"Why charles would he killes his aunt ? " he prosed

" As Mrs Harter was very rich an that Charles is the only heir auraut then kill her aunt just to have money of her heritage"

"ok this explains why he moves so quikly to mexico, it took the heritage and has been enriched through mexico" understand there

" Yes, and we will find that we now find who killed Mrs Harter, he will pay! It will do a lot of prion! "

" good, a cs of over fond it " he spoke happied

" Going to do our break before returning charles" he said alleviating

Voila mon idée et si d'autre on des idées elle sont les bienvenu mais je voudrais avant tout que vou m'aidiez a corriger les faute dans mon texte. Et merci encore