Correction De Devoir

[kcarro]

bonjour

je viens de terminer mon devoir d anglais mais il est surrement tres mauvais vue mon niveau deplorable alors si quel qu un peu m aider je le remercirais beaucoup

Are you exams necessary ?

During the study years we have many exam ,but this exam has utility or not utility ? this question has many answerd .For me exam is necessary but some exam is not necessary . in this text I explain why ?

Exam is necessary in the first for oblige the student to study lesson . If they are not exam many people don’t work in school and after there no job and no culture elementaty for live .

In the second exam help the student for motivation in there work becouse one pupils are not many for work or recompensies .This reussit for exam is a satisfaction in there live of student and his the encouragement for continue school

Exam is necessary for the teacher becouse he must know the nivel of pupils for adapt this lesson and know if this student work or not

We has see this exam is necessary but is exam is necessary in the form his existing ?

Exam existing in university in the form of session but this form is very bad for student because during the session the student work very very hard , stress and his hasn’t life . But during the year many student don’t work and some not insist to lesson .

Exam in the sesson is necassry just for the passage but does not help the teacher in this job becouse they are a idea of nivel of student when the class is finish , when he has finish is job for this pupils

In a conclusion Exam is necessary but in univerity some lesson must value whith many exam because this better for student and teacher but in univerity this organisation is very difficult

[Jean B]

Bonjour,

Je viens de terminer mon devoir d'anglais mais il est sûrement très mauvais vu mon niveau déplorable. Alors si quelqu'un peut m' aider, je le remercierai beaucoup.

Are your exams necessary ?

During (0) study years we have many examS, but ARE THEY USEFUL OR NOT? This question has many answerS. For me SOME examS ARE necessary but some OTHERS ARE not. I WILL explain why in this text.

First, examS ARE necessary TO oblige studentS to study THEIR lessonS. If theRE WERE NO examS many people WOULDN'T work AT school and LATER theY WOULDN'T DEVELOP AN elementaRy culture OR a job TO live .

Second, examS help motivatE studentS in theIR work becAuse THEY are not many TO work or GET reWARDS. PASSING examS is a satisfaction in theIR student'S LIVES and AN encouragement TO continue school.

ExamS ARE necessary for (0) teacherS becAuse TheY must know the LEvel of THEIR pupils TO adapt thEIR lessonS and know if thEIR studentS work or not.

We haVE seeN thAT examS ARE necessary but ARE THEY necessary in the existing form?

ExamS exist in universitIES in the form of A YEARLY session but this form is very bad for studentS because THEY work very very hard during the session, ARE UNDER stress and HAVE NO SOCIAL(?) life. But many studentS don’t work during the year and some DO not EVEN ATTEND lessonS.

ExamS in the session ARE necEssAry just for MOVING UP TO THE NEXT CLASS but do not help (0) teacherS in thEIR job becAuse they ALREADY HAVE aN idea of THEIR studentS' LEVEL when the class is finishED, when TheY HAVE finishED TEACHING.

In conclusion, examS ARE necessary but I THINK THAT AT THE univerSity LEVEL some COURSES SHOULD BE GIVEN A GREATER VALUE with MORE examS. IT WOULD BE better for studentS and teacherS but this is very difficult TO ORGANIZE AT UNIVERSITIES.

* Quelle est ta classe actuelle et/ou depuis combien de temps apprends-tu l'anglais ? Le savoir serait utile afin qu'on puisse te donner des explications adaptées.

Les corrections sont en majuscules pour une double raison de commodité et de pédagogie.

Tel qu'il est à présent, ton texte est compréhensible, c'est déjà ça.

A la lumière de cette correction, essaie de comprendre tes erreurs de façon à ne plus les commettre.

[kcarro]

Bonjour,

Je viens de terminer mon devoir d'anglais mais il est sûrement très mauvais vu mon niveau déplorable. Alors si quelqu'un peut m' aider, je le remercierai beaucoup.

Are your exams necessary ?

During (0) study years we have many examS, but ARE THEY USEFUL OR NOT? This question has many answerS. For me SOME examS ARE necessary but some OTHERS ARE not. I WILL explain why in this text.

First, examS ARE necessary TO oblige studentS to study THEIR lessonS. If theRE WERE NO examS many people WOULDN'T work AT school and LATER theY WOULDN'T DEVELOP AN elementaRy culture OR a job TO live .

Second, examS help motivatE studentS in theIR work becAuse THEY are not many TO work or GET reWARDS. PASSING examS is a satisfaction in theIR student'S LIVES and AN encouragement TO continue school.

ExamS ARE necessary for (0) teacherS becAuse TheY must know the LEvel of THEIR pupils TO adapt thEIR lessonS and know if thEIR studentS work or not.

We haVE seeN thAT examS ARE necessary but ARE THEY necessary in the existing form?

ExamS exist in universitIES in the form of A YEARLY session but this form is very bad for studentS because THEY work very very hard during the session, ARE UNDER stress and HAVE NO SOCIAL(?) life. But many studentS don't work during the year and some DO not EVEN ATTEND lessonS.

ExamS in the session ARE necEssAry just for MOVING UP TO THE NEXT CLASS but do not help (0) teacherS in thEIR job becAuse they ALREADY HAVE aN idea of THEIR studentS' LEVEL when the class is finishED, when TheY HAVE finishED TEACHING.

In conclusion, examS ARE necessary but I THINK THAT AT THE univerSity LEVEL some COURSES SHOULD BE GIVEN A GREATER VALUE with MORE examS. IT WOULD BE better for studentS and teacherS but this is very difficult TO ORGANIZE AT UNIVERSITIES.

* Quelle est ta classe actuelle et/ou depuis combien de temps apprends-tu l'anglais ? Le savoir serait utile afin qu'on puisse te donner des explications adaptées.

Les corrections sont en majuscules pour une double raison de commodité et de pédagogie.

Tel qu'il est à présent, ton texte est compréhensible, c'est déjà ça.

A la lumière de cette correction, essaie de comprendre tes erreurs de façon à ne plus les commettre.

[Jean B]

Merci beaucoup pour ton aide. Je sais que c'est vraiment pas brillant, étant en fac et ayant normalement déjà fait de l'anglais avant comme tout le monde au collège et au lycée.

Merci beaucoup.

[kcarro]

Avec plaisir.

Pour le coup effectivement, tu as du souci à te faire y compris en français...

Mais tous les maux ont un remède, il suffit de vouloir guérir.

Revois sérieusement les bases, par exemple avec "Pratique de l'anglais de A à Z", Hatier éditeur. C'est un petit bouquin génial et simple d'utilisation, avec les règles de grammaire à savoir et de petits exercices dont les corrigés figurent à la fin. Pour travailler à son rythme, c'est l'idéal.

Aide-toi et le ciel t'aidera.

[Jean B]

Je l' ai déjà ce bouquin ; il me reste à l'ouvrir.