Correction D'un Petit Texte En Anglais

[Hannay]

Bonjour à tous et à toute, je dois faire pour mardi un petit texte de 100 mots environ sur wikipédia, le moteur de recherche. Voici le texte que j'ai fais, pourriez-vous le corriger s'il vous plait?

Wikipedia, which is born in 2001 thanks to the Internet, embodies an utopia: the universal distribution of information. It became the most popular research motor owing to its freedom from access and from rights. Its purpose is not to reign over knowledge but to make information available for everyone, as the encyclopedists. It is a revolutionary principle of collective participation. But this popularity is surprising. Wikipedia is criticized on the reliability of its articles. However, it is not more seeded with error than other encyclopedia because every net surfer can fix the mistakes he find. It works on the critical attitude of each of us.

Wikipedia is like an open-source program. Even though it is not in war against the “marketing” of knowledge, It avoids the professional of knowledge.

Voilà, si vous avez des questions sur le sens de certaines phrases, demandez-moi.

Merci d'avance!

Hannay

[Jean B]

Bonsoir,

Wikipedia, which WAS born in 2001 thanks to the Internet, embodies an utopia: the universal distribution of information. It became the most popular research motor owing to its freedom OF access and (0) rights. Its purpose is not to reign over knowledge but to make information available for everyone, as the encyclopedists DID IN THEIR DAYS. It is a revolutionary principle of collective participation. But this popularity is surprising. Wikipedia is criticized on the reliability of its articles. However, it is not more seeded with error than other encyclopedia because every net surfer can fix the mistakes he findS. It works on the critical attitude of each of us.

Wikipedia is like an open-source programME.(program est l'orthographe américaine) Even though it is not in war against the “marketing” of knowledge, It avoids the professionalIZATION(?) of knowledge.

[Hannay]

Bonsoir et merci de votre réponse rapide. En fait pour la dernière phrase je ne sais pas si je me fais bien comprendre mais je veux dire que Wikipédia échappe un peu à ceux qui sont mandaté pour diffuser le savoir (d'ou le terme de "professionel" du savoir...).