Correction D'un Texte

[koumie]

je vous remercie d'avance de prêter attention à mon sujet.

Voici mon sujet : " is speaking english essential to succeeding in life ? "

Voilà mon travail, je préfère vous prevenir que mon niveau d'anglais est quelque peu catastrophique donc soyer indulgent.... !!!

To begin with the english language, i'd say that a spread language, a lot of poeple knows speak english. it seems to me that thanks to globalization.

on the whole everybody knows one or two english words, what i mean is that everybody know how to say "yes", "no" , "i love you"...

the point is that everybody hasn't same level of english. there are bilingual on the other hand there are people whose haven't got notion in english.

to a certain extent, a lot of people do need speak in english for working for example air hostess, marketing man, salesman, in other words, a lot of jobs whose necessity of speak in englsih.

now, you learn english in school ( "on apprend l'anglais dès la maternelle")

for travel, speaking english is essential for find a itinerary.

yet, many people doesn't know speak in english and they succeed very well in your life.

c'est tres court ... je devais faire de 200- 250 mots, si vous pouviez pofiner je vous en serais reconnaissante. merci d'avance

bye

[mary-ca]

To begin with the english language, i'd say that a lot of people know to speak a spread language like english. it seems to me that it's due to globalization.

in the whole world everybody knows at least one or two english words; what i mean is that everybody knows how to say "yes", "no" , "i love you"...

the point is that everybody hasn't the same level of english.On one hand there are bilinguals and on the other there are people who haven't got a notion of english.

To a certain extent, a lot of people do need to speak english for their work : for example air hostess, marketing man, salesman, in other words, a lot of jobs ask for the ability to speak english.

now, a lot of elementary school offer the opportuntiy to learn that language. it is said that the sooner you learn the better it is!

Nowadays, it's very hard to travel and find own's way when you don't speak english.

But still lot of people suceed very well in their life without knowing how to put up a single sentence in english !

voila j'ai essayais de corriger au max !

[koumie]

merci à toi !