chacha7611 Posté(e) le 18 octobre 2007 Signaler Posté(e) le 18 octobre 2007 Bonjour à tous, j'ai un petit résumé en anglais à faire et j'aimerai le rendre avec le moins de fautes possible, donc si vous passez par ici pouvez vous m'indiquer les éventuelles fautes que j'aurais pu commettre...Merci d'avance ; This article, written by W. Gibbs and S. Lyall, deals with the 2007 Nobel Peace prize which was awarded to the former Vice President Al Gore. Indeed, Mr. Gore and the Intergovernmental Panel on Climate Chance act against global warming. Mr. Gore launched a film named An Inconvenient Truth which focuses on him and his travels in support of his efforts to educate the public about the severity of the climate crisis. In the slideshow Gore reviews the scientific opinion on climate change, discusses the politics and economics of global warming, and describes the consequences he believes global climate change will produce if the amount of human-generated greenhouse gases are not significantly reduced in the very near future. A center point of the film is his examination of the annual temperature and CO2 levels for the past 650,000 years in Antarctic. For the chairman of the peace committee, the Nobel was not meant to be a “kick in the leg to anyone”. This sentence shows that this prize does not include some political values. But it also encourages all countries to pay attention for the problem of global warming, and in particular for Americans because the Bush administration didn’t ratify the Kyoto protocol in 1998 whereas United States represent a quarter of emissions of greenhouse gases. The Nobel reward either scientists who take part on the climate change. Indeed, their job involves a lot of sacrifices : they travel all over the world, they do not have a real home life and they must participate to boring conferences. According to Mr. Gore, global warming is a very significant problem for all countries of the Earth. The global average air temperature near the Earth's surface rose 0.74 ± 0.18 °C during the last 100 years due to strongly by greenhouse gases. This growth would lead to a sea level rise, an increasing intensity of extreme weather events like hurricanes, a retreat of glacier, a species extinction… Every people must be feel concerned by this problem. People can use buses or bicycle instead of their car when it is possible ; take care that they switch off the light when they leave a room… Although all political leaders should tackle the problem together for have truly positive effects.
E-Bahut Jean B Posté(e) le 18 octobre 2007 E-Bahut Signaler Posté(e) le 18 octobre 2007 Bonjour, Quelques "dérapages incontrôlés" signalés en majuscules... This article, written by W. Gibbs and S. Lyall, deals with the 2007 Nobel Peace prize which was awarded to the former Vice President Al Gore. Indeed, Mr. Gore and the Intergovernmental Panel on Climate Chance act against global warming. Mr. Gore launched a film named An Inconvenient Truth which focuses on him and his travels in support of his efforts to educate the public about the severity of the climate crisis. In the slideshow Gore reviews the scientific opinion on climate change, discusses the politics and economics of global warming, and describes the consequences he believes global climate change will produce if the amount of human-generated greenhouse gases are not significantly reduced in the very near future. A centRE point of the film is his examination of the annual temperature and CO2 levels for the past 650,000 years in Antarctic. For the chairman of the peace committee, the Nobel was not meant to be a “kick in the leg to anyone”. This sentence shows that this prize does not include ANY(?) political values. But it also encourages all countries to pay attention TO the problem of global warming, and in particular (0) Americans because (0) Bush administration didn’t ratify the Kyoto protocol in 1998 whereas THE United States representS a quarter of greenhouse gases emissions. The Nobel ALSO(?) rewardS scientists who take part on the climate change. Indeed, their job involves a lot of sacrifices : they travel all over the world, they do not have a real home life and they must participate IN boring conferences. According to Mr. Gore, global warming is a very significant problem for all countries of the Earth. The global average air temperature near the Earth's surface rose 0.74 ± 0.18 °C during the last 100 years, strongly due to (0) greenhouse gases. This growth would lead to a sea level rise, an increasing intensity of extreme weather events like hurricanes, a DECLINE of glacierS, a species extinction… EveryONE must (0) feel concerned by this problem. People can use buses or bicycleS instead of their carS when it is possible ; MAKE SURE that they switch off the lightS when they leave a room… NEVERTHELESS, all political leaders should tackle the problem together IN ORDER TO have truly positive effects. - centre (orthographe BE) plutôt que center (orthographe AE) - The United States est toujours précédé de l'article et commande un verbe singulier. Je sais, c'est singulier mais en l'occurrence on les considère comme un pays unique et non comme une fédération de 50 états qui ont choisi de lier leur destin. - Pour le reste, tu es assez grand garçon pour te passer de commentaires superflus.
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