Matrix : Ma Réponse Ne Passe Pas

[yveslouis]

Hello, Matrix!

Ma réponse ne passe pas par MP.

J'obtiens :

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J'essaierai encore demain matin. Si ça continue, puis-je poster ici ?

Merci d'avance.

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[Matrix_]

Halo anglais!

Yes pas de problème ou alors par email à [anti spam] peut importe

En tout cas merci d'avoir aidé à la correction

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[yveslouis]

Hello!

As usual :

<...> = à supprimer

MAJUSCULES = à ajouter

(...) = Commentaires

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(Je n'ai pas beaucoup trouvé d'emplois de "contribute" suivi du gérondif. Tu peux l'employer cependant si tu préfères cette construction.)

Good luck!

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[Matrix_]

Hello,

Apparemment mon message a été supprimé lol

donc je redis merci anglais pour l'aide!

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