Exposer

[AlYaZmAlI]

salut! j'ai un exposer un faire c'est présenter une chanson et je voudrais juste que vous me corrigez ce que j'ai écrit après il faudra que j'aprenne tous ce texte et le dire en orale je suis vraiment null en anglais mais bon on essaye

1. First, i'm going to speak about the singer.

the singer name is HADISE, it is very good.

2. say why you have chosen... I have chosen this song because i like Hadise , she is cool, beautiful and I enjoy his music, she is very famous. I think tallent like hers is rare to find. she also produces Turkish rap music and I like Turkish rap music. I expire to be like her and a succes ful and business woman.

I have an ecleptic taste in music but this one of my favourte genre.

3.Explain/sum up /the words, teh story ( 3 mus max)

voici les paroles :

Stir me up, stir me up

Make it hot, make it naughty

Stir me up, stir me up

I like that, boy you’ve got me

Stir me up, stir me up

Make it hot, make it naughty

Stir me up, stir me up

I like that, boy you’ve got me

Stir me up, stir me up

Make it hot, make it naughty

Stir me up, stir me up

I like that, boy you’ve got me

I can see you standing there

Checkin’ out the dress I wear

But boy tell me first what's on your mind

I know that you want me too

Make you feel like your my boo

So boy get me in the mood tonight

That's right it's gotta be all or nothing

Don't make me wait, let me know that ya want me

I don't wanna sleep alone tonight

You can stay as long as the moon is

Shining in my little bedroom

I just gotta have you by my side

I don’t wanna sleep alone

Tonight I gotta have you by my side

Stir me up, stir me up

Make it hot, make it naughty

Stir me up, stir me up

I like that, boy you’ve got me

Stir me up, stir me up

Make it hot, make it naughty

Stir me up, stir me up

I like that, boy you’ve got me

I know I've been watching you

You've been checkin’ on me too

Oh boy, are you man enough for me

Do just what ya gotta do

I can taste the heat in you

Oh boy, let me take a bite in you

That's right it's gotta be all or nothing

Don't make me wait, let me know that you want me

I just gotta have you by my side

I don’t wanna sleep alone

Tonight I gotta have you by my side

Stir me up, stir me up

Make it hot, make it naughty

Stir me up, stir me up

I like that, boy you’ve got me

Stir me up, stir me up

Make it hot,make it naughty

Stir me up,stir me up

I like that, boy you’ve got me

Seni istiyorum

Yaklas yanima sakin korkma

Sana hastayim anlasana

Yaklas yanima sakin korkma

Sana hastayim bunu anlasana

Stir me up, stir me up

Make it hot, make it naughty

Stir me up, stir me up

I like that, boy you’ve got me

Stir me up, stir me up

Make it hot, make it naughty

Stir me up, stir me up

I like that, boy you’ve got me

Yaklas bana sakin korkma

Sana hastayim anlasana

Yaklas yanima sakin korkma

(bon les paroles sont pas très bon mais voila je comprennais rien des paroles et j'ai demander a un copain et il ma dit quelque truk )

The title is Stir me up by Hadise

It is a song about a woman that wanting to share a mans bed and she does not wants to be alone. ( jtrouve que c'est un peu cour mais bon )

merci d'avance

[Totochita]

Juste quelques corrections vite fait..

the singer's name is HADISE, it is very good.

( tu veux dire qu'IL est tres bon non ? le chanteur ? alors c'est HE is very good )

I enjoy his music ==> her music ( puisque his est le pronom possessif masculin et que la tu parles d'une chanteuse )

Tallent ==> talent ( je crois et je ne suis meme pas sure que ce soit le mot correct en anglais )

I expire to be like her = j'espere etre comme elle ? alors ca serait " I hope i'll be like her "

POur le reste, je ne me sens pas assez sure de moi pour t'aider.. Alors ej laisse cela au grand soin d'Anglais.. en esperant ( pour toi ) qu'il passera par la.. car c'est lui le pro!

[AlYaZmAlI]

Merci bcp Totochita

[yveslouis]

Zut, alors ! Je t'avais une correction aux petits oignons et au moment de l'envoyer, je n'ai plus pu me connecter sur le site !

Je recommence, en croisant les doigts. lol

en rouge : à supprimer

en vert = à ajouter

en bleu = citation

1. First, i'm going to speak tell you about the singer.

the The singer's name is HADISE,. it She is a very good singer.

2. say why you have chosen... I have chosen this song because i I like Hadise. , she She is cool, beautiful and I enjoy his her music,. she She is very famous. I think tallent a talent like hers is rare to find. she She also produces Turkish rap music and I like Turkish rap music. I expire expect to be like her and to become a succes ful successful and business woman.

I have an ecleptic eclectic taste in music but this one of is my favourite genre.

3.Explain/sum up /the words, teh story ( 3 mus max)

voici les paroles :

(Je les supprime.)

The title is "Stir me up" by Hadise

It is a song about a woman that wanting who wants to share a man's bed and she does not wants to be alone. She knows she attracts him -- she says :"I can see you standing there

Checkin’ out the dress I wear" -- but she isn't sure whether he wants to make love to her or not. And the words of the song are like a question which she makes :"Do you want me or not?" One have to notice that some of the words of the song are in Turkish. They match perfectly with the music. To put it in a nutshell : it really IS a great song!

Entraine toi plusieurs fois à dire le texte sans regarder ta feuille. Il faut donner l'impression que ce texte "sort" de toi. Penses aussi que ce que tu dis, les autres doivent le comprendre. Donc, pas de précipitation. Ne te "débarrasses pas d'une corvée". Fais partager ta passion aux autres.

Good luck !

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[AlYaZmAlI]

thank you very much

[AlYaZmAlI]

Je tiens a vous remercier Totochita et anglais merci beaucoup, j'ai suivit tes conseil anglais je l'ai dit lentement mon texte en esperent que sa aller durer longtps mais non ça n'a duré que 3 min et pourtant je me suis bien préparé mais bon j'ai eu un 12 ça va.. j'attendais plus mais c'est pas grave j'espère que je ferais mieu la prochaine fois...

[yveslouis]

Je pense que 3 mn, c'est bien pour un exposé.

Si tu penses que ta note de 12 (qui est très honorable ! ) peut être améliorée, c'est peut-être du côté des accents toniques que tu dois faire (aussi) porter tes efforts. Par exemple, les prépositions ne sont (presque) jamais accentuées. Les pronoms personnels compléments non plus...

Un accent tonique déplacé donne au professeur une mauvaise impresssion, ce qui doit être évité le plus possible. Par exemple, en regardant dans un dictionnaire où l'accent se situe afin de s'entrainer.

(En 5ème, beaucoup d'élèves prononcent "eleven" au lieu de "eleven" Cela doit être évité au Lycée.)

Bon courage.

keep up the good job !

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