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[justine16]

Alors voila le sujet que nous a donné le professeur, a faire en 250-300 mots.

"For you, which is more important for choice of your studies and career: following your passion or listening to reason?"

Et voila ce que j'ai fais en 1h30 environs:

"Choose between the passion and the reason is a real dilemma. Everybody are torn by these two choices. But the decision depend to the personality of everyone.

In my mind, choose the reason is act sensible and well-considered. For a stable and drow-up futur it is the best choice. Like this, we are sure to don’t have bad surprise. Chose the reason necessitate a good knowledge to our capacity. But sometimes, it’s possible that’s not really our choice, and the parents decide for us. It’s why I think the passion is an option more personal. We can give more effort for the success. And after, we will be more happy in the job we can find. But this course can be full of pitfalls, because is less sure. And it’s possible we dont have the capacity to realize our dreams.

For me, I think I can do an alloy of the both. Of Course, I chose the passion. Because I really want to work in the cinema, and I can’t imagine my future like teacher or librarian. The cinema is a part important of my personality, and that’s impossible for my to live without. But, I dont want to be devour by my passion, I think I need to stay realist. So, I chose to make great studies in the best schools possible. It’s why I work hard for fulfil my dream. In my mind, long studies can give me good opportuneness in different sectors, but of course, always in cinema."

Je suis pas spécialement douée en grammaire, alors si quelqu'un pourrait m'aider a corriger mes fautes. Merci d'avance.

[Vaness78]

et bah moi j'ai pas vu de fautes !! et je trouve que ton texte est très bien !! bisous

[Vanderbick]

Je pense avoir vu quelques petites erreurs mais l'ensemble est fortement appréciable...

"Choosing between passion and reason is a real dilemma. Everybody is torn by these two choices. But the decision depends on everyone's personality.

As far as I'm concerned, choosing reason is a sensible and well-considered act. For a stable and drow-up futur it is the best choice. Indeed, one is sure not to have bad surprises. Choosing reason necessitates a good knowledge to one's capacity. But sometimes, it’s possible that’s not really your choice, and the parents decide for you. That's the reason why I think passion is an option more personal. You can give more efforts for being successful. Thus, you will be happier in the job you can find. But this course can be full of pitfalls, because it is less sure. And it’s possible you dont have the capacity to realize your dreams.

For me, I think I can do an alloy of the both. Of Course, I choose passion. Because I really want to work in the cinema, and I can’t imagine my future like a teacher or a librarian. The cinema is an important part of my personality, and that’s impossible for me to live without. But, I dont want to be devour by my passion, I think I need to stay realistic. So, I choose making great studies in the best schools possible. That’s why I work hard so as to fulfil my dream. In my mind, long studies can give me good opportuneness in different sectors, but of course, always in the world of cinema."

[justine16]

merci beaucoup, je pense qu'il me reste plus qu'a reviser ces points^^