Corriger Mes Fautes

[didi10]

bonjour je suis pas tres bonne en expression ecrite alors pouvez vous corriger mes fautes merci beaucoup

1)

The title of the article is a metaphor. The bird represent Ana which in spite of its lack of freedom following the out-of-paper condition, of social life and a work baited to succeed since its entry illegal with The United States and in spite of its lack of qualification saw largely better which if it had remained in Mexico. For Ana "the cage" represents illegality of its situation and its freedom represented by the verb "sings" that shows which A a success in its work, one life better than in Mexico

2)Ana is a woman determined and courageous, it A took much risks to leave Mexico because she wanted to have a life better for it and its family. Its choices one were rather difficult because it has to leave his/her children in Mexico with his family, all to leave for more never y to turn over. But one could think that that A was rather an obligation since it did that also for the future of her children so that they have one life better and so that they can achieve large thing. Ana is a good bus example in spite of its illegality, its weak experiment and its lack of qualification. It could succeed in the field of works because it is one woman effective, assiduous, keen. That shows well that a person who wants of to leave some is its statute can succeed.

Ana could succeed in its life in spite of its illegality. One can to say that it has a true courage bus in spite of its separation with its family and its child, it did everything to succeed it baited himself and it rewards some could have better a life like its family because it helped them financially.

merci ce travail je dois le rendre demain alors aider moi sil vous plait

[Vanderbick]

Bonjour didi10. J'ai essayé d'apporter quelques correction, seulement je suis en 1ère (contrairement à toi qui es en Terminale!) et j'espère avoir fait de mon mieux!

1)

The title of the article is a metaphor. The bird represents Ana which, despite(pour éviter la répétition par la suite!) its lack of freedom, is following the out-of-paper condition of social life and a work baited to succeed since her illegal entry in The United States. In spite of her lack of qualification, she saw largely better than if it had remained in Mexico. For Ana "the cage" represents the illegality of her situation and her freedom is represented by the verb "sings" that shows how Ana successes in her work, one life better than in Mexico           

2)Ana is a determined and courageous woman, She took many risks to leave Mexico because she wanted to have a life better for her family and herself. Her choices were rather difficult because she has to leave her children in Mexico with her family, all to leave for more never and to turn over. But no one could think that Ana has an obligation since she did that also for her children's future so that they would have a better life and could achieve large things. Ana is a good example despite her illegality, her weak experiment and her lack of qualification. She could succeed in the field of employment as she is an effective, assiduous and keen woman, which shows that a person who wants to leave some of her statute can succeed.

Ana could succeed in her life in spite of her illegality. We can say that she has a true courage despite her separation with her family and her child, she did everything to succeed, she baited herself and rewards some to have a better life and supported her family.

merci ce travail je dois le rendre demain alors aider moi sil vous plait

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