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Ca serai sympa de me corriger ces deux sujets, merci d avance c pour demain

 Amérique du Nord, juin 2004

Question 12

a ) Imagine the boy’s answer

The boy was all agog, and suddenly broke out crying.

“I’m afraid I’ve been detained…”, he said in a earnest voice. “ It’s kinda Mrs Noob’s fault; she gave me school detention.... She hates my guts, I am helpless in the matter ! It was so deadly dull off there, I skipped it.... So, I just goofed off with Mary; I’m such a sucker for a pretty face! Then, I just showed off in front of her, trying to climb up the narrow hill over there; guess I shouldn’t have, I’m definitely too gawky! I fell flat on my face, but I must say I got off lightly, given my legs weren’t broken; but my clothes had been so tacky, I was a total mess....I vegged out for a long time, for fear of reprisals....What a dummy I am ! “( 139 words)

[ His mother was casting a meaningful look at Scotty. “ You’re letting me down, you saphead; I was franticly worried while you just was playin’ around? I’m afraid you’re up against it now. Dad will punish you; as for me, I guess I’ll get around to it one day... As for your knees, serve you right! Now go to bed, you’re lucky I haven’t got the stick within reach!

The boy was steppin out the room , while tears were trincking down his cheek.

“ Stephen, by the way, have a good night...”, the mother said, smitten with remorse. ]

b ) Who should enforce discipline in a family ?

Children are often a cause of worry; they need to be continuously looked after. They’re prone to do a lot of stupid things, and this is the role of parents to enforce discipline, in order they do not it again.

In the one hand, dads should take care of that difficult task, since they ar more credible for the young kid; a man stands for authority, thanks to his deep voice and his more brawny body. A woman stands for love, and if she gives the kid a telling-off, the odds are that the child doesn’t make it out. Besides, women do not always have it easy with babies...

But on the other hand, the relationship between a child and her mother is far more different than with the father. The mom almost embodies a “ role model “, and a real complicity became established between each other since the child’s birth.

Discipline shall eventually be shared between both the mother and the father. Both have their say. ( 164 words )

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une petite correction ,

tu disais ! :(

c'est comment

qd c'est long alors ? ;)

là tu accumules à tort , ne crois tu pas ? :rolleyes:

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