Correction Expression Pers. (150+150 Words

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2. a.We live in a society where everybody are hurried, where everybody only think to the work..

That's why, today's growing need to communicate more because it's important without communication,people can't be happy.

But, actually more and more people get busy,and new way (style est quand meme bien) of communication appeared : Internet, cellular phone, ...t's very usefull, today's growing need to communicate can adopt with the current society. In fact,pas d'articilepeople can be connected with everyone, everywhere in the world. For example, one father can communicate with his children when he's at work. In spite of the good things this new styles of communication, (there are dangers.)can be dangerous.pas d'articilepeople can become addicted ! That's why Internet and the cellular phone are considered as drugs. When you go too frequently in the net, one dependance setups. Them, the need of communication, today, are more important, and different, and they can be dangerous. (bon là...ta phrase elle est bizar) Them, today, the need of communication, is more important and different, and they (qui ils ??) can be dangerous

bon tu m'excuses mais le deuxieme texte je le ferrais plus tard. mais revoit déjà ca. ha oui surtout PEOPLE et pas the people. faut pas chercher à se compliquer la vie

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