parisienne Posté(e) le 28 octobre 2004 Signaler Posté(e) le 28 octobre 2004 Pouvez vous corriger mes fautes SVP merci Erin is an American student who wants to improve her french. She is 24 years old and she lived in California before her coming two weeks an a month ago in Paris, which she find very beautiful. She was studiying film at San Diego University. She lives with her parents and her sister, Heather who is 22 years old, in a big house with three bedrooms and a very big yard with green grass. She is fond of animals, so she breeds three dogs:two bouviers de flanders and one shetland sheepdog. She has got a very old car, a Mercury Comet turquoise from ' 62. Like all the girls of her age, she takes an interest in boys. She likes french boys because they are dressed better than the American. She prefers dark hair and she wants that her boyfriend (soit) taller than her. Unfortnately she is alone now. Erin is greedy. She prefers homecookedmeals to fast foods.She is fond of sushis and Mexican food. She likes french cheese, chocolate and bread. Erin is in a full bloom youg woman. She likes the rock music. For this purpose, she listen to "The Talking Heads" from the 70s and to the french group "AIR". She plays a little guitar.She goes much to theatre (quand le temps le lui permet). The last film which she has seen at the cinema is " Eternal Sunshine of the Spartless Mind" with Jim Carrey. She adores Johnny Deep because he is a good-lookingman and she thinks that he's a good actor. She has already gone to New York and she finds that Paris is more beautyful but NY has more live music. She speaks a little Japanese because she wants to teach english in Japan. She likes travelling that's why she hopes to visit Tokyo. She likes sport too. So she runs and she does Yoga. Erin is fed up US governement. She can't stand Bush and she finds that the french is better. She thinks that John Kerry is maybe not better than Bush but the Americans have no choice. She will to vote by absentee ballot.She denounces US system school which is too expansive for university.
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