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Voici mon texte ou je pense avoir enlevé pas mal de fautes ! Merci de votre conseil j'essairai de l'appliquer ! Si mon texte a trop de fautes pourriez vous juste me dire si les règles du discours sont bien respectés et ou mettre des questions-tags ! After a mass shooting in the school, two survivors tell about the carrying of weapons The first is the guns rights activists and this parents are members in the NRA The second wants to restrict access to gun John sigh "If they are more guns in a free access there is death toll more less will" Bryan frown in front of John and snap "What, on the contrary to of their we less gun than last year's the murderer may be haven't gun he can't do the slaughter. However, it is a teenagers" John repeats "Yes, but he has the rights to be a gun owner indeed of the guns controls are more permissive the students saw defend himself and ..." Bryan break in "However, it's not in adding guns that we go to reduce the numbers of mass shooting" Bryan explain "The gun homicide rate in 25 it's better in the USA that the other developed country. There are 400 million guns in the USA for 350 millions of American people and bear arms has never help somebody without the police" John retort "The guns protect freedom it must gun attention to the murderer and not on the gun"

Bonjour J'ai une tache finale à rendre ou le but est d'écrire un discours avec la consigne suivante : After a mass shooting in your school, you meet a friend of yours whose parents are members of the NRA. Both of you are devastated but your friend still thinks that more guns could have prevented this slaughte. Exchange your arguments and try to convice each other. In pairs write a dialogue using elements studied in class. Je suis en terminale et le niveau souhaité est le B2 Il faut respecter toutes les règles du dialogue : Introduction, guillements, verbes introducteurs, questions tags, gap fillers ... La seul exeption est que l'on peut utiliser du présent a la place du prétérit ! Voici ce que j'ai écrit : After a mass shooting in the school two survivors tell about the carrying of weapons The first is the guns rights activistsand this parents are members in the NRA The second want to restrict access to gun John sigh "If they are more guns in a free access there are death toll more less will" Bryan frown in front of John and snap " What, In contrary to of there we less gun than last years the murderer maybe haven't gun he can't do the slaughter. Morever it is a teenagers" John reapeat " Yes but he has the rights to be a gun owner indeed of the guns controls are more permissive the students saw defend himself and ..." Bryan break in "But it's not in adding guns that we go to reduce the numbers of mass shooting" Bryan explain "The gun homicide rate in 25 more higher in USA than the other developped country. Thre is 400 millions guns in USA for 350 millions of american peopleand bear arms has never help somebody withoutthe police" John retort "The guns protect freedom it must gun attention to the murderer and not on the gun" Le texte n'est pas fini mais je voulais avoir un début de dialogue sans faute et je suis sur qu'il y en a beaucoup Merci d'avance Vendée85