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  1. lili1974

    Correction devoir

    Bonjour, je tiens à vous remercier pour votre aide et de votre patience. merci et bon week-end.
  2. lili1974

    Correction devoir

    Bonjour, j'ai essayé de corriger certaines fautes. Voici mes deux textes. Merci de me dire quel texte dois-je présenter. Merci pour votre aide. texte1 Today, 15 December 2045, temperatures remain very high under a blazing sun barely veiled by a light haze. For the next three days: Monday, Tuesday and Wednesday very violent rains are expected in Washington DC for three days non-stop. A meteorite rain must fall this Monday morning in the south, in Louisiana.Avoid going out and take shelter.Moreover, in Los Angeles, a hurricane will occur. Starting on Tuesday morning and may be very violent, the most violent ever with also some snow for Tuesday and Wednesday with a very veiled sky. A clear sky is expected on Wednesday in California with a meteorite shower for all the day. Nevertheless, for Tuesday and Friday, Volcano Mount Jefferson in Oregon, according to our statistics will wake up with a big eruption which will flood a big part of OregonSaturday and Sunday in Arizona a maximum drought will take place. It seems it's the first time something like this happens in the world.The climate change policy was put forward by the protocol of Kyoto, which aimed to prevent damaging the environment and the climate, it’s the reason why greenhouse gas was prohibited. A regulation was put in place to avoid all the problems already present like the Arctic and Antarctic ice cap melting, a dramatic elevation of temperatures as well as rampaging volcanoes or the multiplication of hurricanes. All these disasters were due to the global warming despite all the climate change policies that were already in place This weather report is coming to the end, thanks for listening to me. Good Bye! texte 2 Today, 5 August 2050 temperatures remain very high under a blazing sun barely veiled by a light haze. Thunderstorms will erupt over northeastern California.Fires are expected.However, tomorrow morning, torrential rains will fall on the capital, Washington DC for three days non-stop. Floods to be expected on a major part of the territory.Avoid going out and stay in a safe place. On Wednesday, hurricane Kylie will approach the coast and may devastate everything on its way.Avoid going out and take shelter.Thursday, the worst was predicted ! Vulcanologists fear an eruption of volcano Jefferson located in central Oregon in the northwestern United States.Friday, risks of snowfall that will paralyze the center of the country.After this apocalypse, a return to normal is expected this weekend. However, a significant drop in temperatures is to be expected!!!!As you have just seen, in many parts of the world, precipitation, floods, storms, heat waves and drought are increasing in intensity.Do not wait until 2045 (two thousand and forty five) to react !We can reduce risks by lessening global greenhouse effects and limiting carbon dioxide.Remember that the climate change policy put forward by the Kyoto Protocol. This weather report is over, thank you for listening to me.Good night !
  3. lili1974

    Correction devoir

    bonjour, j'ai fait les corrections du devoir que vous avez corrigé. le voici. Je manque de confiance en moi et vu que je dois le présenter devant toute la classe, je panique un peu. vraiment désolé de vous faire lire un second texte mais si vous pouvez m'aider ça serait gentil. merci . Today 15 December 2045, temperatures remain very high under a blazing sun barely veiled by a light haze. For the next three days: Monday, Tuesday and Wednesday very violent rains are expected in Washington DC for three days non-stop. A meteorite rain must fall this Monday morning in the south, in Louisiana. Avoid going out and take shelter. Morever, in Los Angeles, a hurricane will occur. Starting on Tuesday morning and may be very violent, the most violent ever with also some snow for Tuesday and Wednesday with a very veiled sky. A clear sky is excepted on Wednesday in California with a meteorite shower for all the day. Nevertheless, for Tuesday and Friday, Volcano Mount Jefferson in Oregon according to our statistics will wake up with a big eruption which will flood a big part of Oregon Saturday and Sunday in Arizona a maximum drought will take place . It seems it's the first time something like this happens in the world The climate change policy was put forward by the protocal of Kyoto which aimed to prevent damaging the environment and the climate, it’s the reason why greenhouse gas was prohibited A regulation was put in place to avoid all the problems already present like the Arctic and Antarctic ice cap melting, a dramatic elevation of temperatures as well as rampaging volcanoes or the multiplication of hurricanes. All these disasters were due to the global warming despite all the climate change policies that were already in place This weather report is coming to the end, thanks for listening to me. Good Bye!
  4. lili1974

    Correction devoir

    Pouvez vous m'aider à corriger ce texte. c'est un devoir relevé. merci . Good evening, ladies and gentlemen. Today, 5 August 2050, the temperatures remain very high under a blazing sun scarcely barely veiled by a light haze. Thunder storms will erupt over northeastern California. Fires are expected. However, tomorrow morning, torrential rains will fall on the capital Washington DC for three days non-stop. Floods are to be expected on a major part of the territory. Avoid going out and stay safe. On Wednesday, hurricane Kylie will approach the coast and may devastate everything on its way. Put yourself safe in the bunkers !! Thursday, the worst is to predict! Vulcanologists fearing an eruption volcano jefferson located in central Oregon in the northwestern United States. Friday, risks of snowfall that will paralyze the center of the country. After this apocalypse, a return to normal this weekend. However, a significant drop in temperature is to be expected!!!! As you have just seen, in many parts of the world, precipitation, floods, storms, heat waves and drought are increasing in intensity. Do not wait until 2045 (two thousand and forty five) to react! We can reduce risk by reducing global greenhouse effects and limiting carbon dioxide. Recall that the climate change policy is put forward by the Kyoto Protocol. This weather report is over, thank you for listening to me. Good night!
  5. lili1974

    poème soleils couchants

    merci beaucoup .
  6. lili1974

    Bulletin météo

    Merci beaucou pour votre aide. Bonne soirée.
  7. lili1974

    Bulletin météo

    bonjour voici mon écrit, pouvez vous me le corriger. merci Good evening ladies and gentleman, Today the 15 December 2015, the temperatures remains very hard under a blassing sun barely veiled by a light hase. For the next three days: Monday, Tuesday and Wednesday very violent rains are excepted in the capital: Washington DC for three days non-stop. A meteorite rain must fall this Monday morning in the south, in Louisiana. Avoid going out and stay in the shelter. Morover, in Los Angeles, an hurricane will manifest itself. Starting on Tuesday morning and may be very violent, the most violent ever with also some snow for Tuesday and Wednesday with a very veiled sky. For Wednesday is excepted a clear sky in California with a meteorite shower for all the day. Nevertheless, for Tuesday and Friday, the Volcano Mont Jefferson in Oregon according to our statistics will wake up with a big volcanic eruption who will flood a big part of the states of Oregon, state of the northwest of the United States. And for the week-end: Saturday and Sunday in the Arizona a maximale drought will take place for all the week-end. It’s seems to be the first time something like this happened in the world. The climate change policy is put forward by the protocal of Kyoto which aim to prevent the harmful behaviour for the environment and for the climate, it’s for that greenhouse gas is prohibited. A regulation is put in place to avoid all the problems already present like the ice cap melting Arctic and Antarctic, a dramatic elevation of the temperatures as well as the rampage volcanoes or the multiplication of the hurricane. All the desasters are du of the Global Warming despite all the climate change policy are already in place. This weather report is coming to the end, thanks for listening me. Good Bye!
  8. lili1974

    poème soleils couchants

    Bonjour, j'aurai besoin d'aide sur ce poème, je dois le présenter et l'expliquer. je sais que le thème de ce poème est la mélancolie, la tristesse. merci pour votre aide. Soleils couchants Paul Verlaine Une aube affaiblie Verse par les champs La mélancolie Des soleils couchants. La mélancolie Berce de doux chants Mon cœur qui s’oublie Aux soleils couchants. Et d’étranges rêves, Comme des soleils Couchants sur les grèves, Fantômes vermeils, Défilent sans trêves, Défilent, pareils À de grands soleils Couchants sur les grèves. Paul Verlaine, Poèmes saturniens
  9. lili1974

    Bulletin météo

    rebonjour, ok merc beaucoupi, dès que j'ai fini pouvez vous me le corriger svp.
  10. lili1974

    Bulletin météo

    bonjour, j'aurai besoin de votre aide , je dois présenter en anglais un bulletin méteo qui annoncerai l'apocalypse. voici les instructions. You're in the year 2050,. Make an apocalypse weather forecast for the whole week. Explaining the probability for the natural disaster of each day happen. After that, explain how the climate change policy in the 21st century led to that kind of extreme weather. faire un dicours fluide et léger. merci pou votre aide.
  11. lili1974

    suijet d'invention

    lili 1974, fille. c'est moi qui est envoyé mon brouillon sur Martin lutHer King. Peux tu me dire si c'est bon pour que je le recopie car je dois le rendre demain. merci pour ton aide.
  12. lili1974

    suijet d'invention

    bonsoir, voici mon brouillon, Martin Luther King, Qui aurait cru qu'un homme aussi grandiose que Martin Luther King, un homme qui en inspirait tant, un homme qui avait la volonté d'en finir contre la discrimination raciale et qui portait l'espoir du peuple noir puisse partir en une poignée de seconde devant sa chambre d’hôtel tué par un assassin, une ordure parmi tant d'autres dans l'humanité. Le 4 avril 1968 restera sûrement une des pires dates dans l'histoire de l'Amérique. Martin Luther King, tu étais un prêcheur de la bonne conscience, tu es la lumière qui a illuminée le chemin de la lutte que d'autres hommes courageux on suivit. Tu as commencé en tant que simple pasteur, tu étais convaincu que l’église devait jouer un rôle actif dans l'établissement de la justice sociale. Mais tu n'as pas seulement pensé, tu t'es pris en main et tu as agis. C'est pourquoi en 1955, après l'arrestation de Rosa Parks, tu prends la tête d'un mouvent en vue de la soutenir et tu organises un boycott, un boycott qui durera un an et qui aura eu raison de toi, puisque la Cour Suprême donna tort à la compagnie de bus. Martin Luther King, tu es peut-être mort, mais saches que ton combat n'aura pas été vain, tu resteras pour toujours un symbole de la lutte pour l’égalité des droits civiques au yeux de tous. je sais pas comment utliser des figures de styles. merci pour votre aide.
  13. lili1974

    suijet d'invention, rédiger un eloge

    bonsoir, je dois rédiger un éloge sur une personne qui vous inspire, en respectant la structure du discours et en utilisant trois figure de style. merci pour votre aide
  14. lili1974

    suijet d'invention

    rédiger un éloge sur une personne qui vous inspire, en respectant la structure du discours et en utilisant trois figure de style. merci pour votre aide.
  15. lili1974

    biodiversité

    bonsoir, je voudrai de l'aide. Pouvez vous m'aider sur cette question. critiquez et corriger à l'aide de vos connaissance la phrase "oui la différence entre les gènes de deux individus d'une meme espece est la variation biologique la plus fondamentale) merci pour votre aide
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