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  • Date de naissance 23/09/1940

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    Garçon
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    Toulouse inner suburb

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  1. JRB

    Question

    Bonjour, Quand on vient demander de l'aide sur ce forum, le minimum de politesse et de savoir-vivre consiste à commencer par écrire "Bonjour" ou "Bonsoir" selon l'heure qu'il est. Mémorise le pour la prochaine fois. Note qu'en anglais le point d'interrogation se colle sans espace derrière le dernier mot. J'ai rectifié mais mémorise le.
  2. JRB

    Exposé

    Bonjour,
  3. JRB

    To improve

    Bonjour, Le verbe "improve" étant transitif direct et indirect, les deux formulations sont correctes, mon Capitaine ! En fait, les deux formulations sont très voisines mais, pour pinailler un peu, je dirais que la seconde est un peu plus "académique" que la première. 1. Au club, vous perfectionnerez vos compétences en informatique/technologie de l'information. 2. Au club, vous apporterez des améliorations à vos compétences en informatique/technologie de l'information.
  4. JRB

    Dm

    Bonjour, Au moins, tu ne risques pas de surmener ton cerveau ! 2] Vrai ou faux ? Justifiez en citant le texte. 1. Faux - voir lignes 1, 2. Dans ton dictionnaire, cherche le sens du verbe "undermine". 2. Faux - voir lignes 4,5. 3. Faux - voir ligne 17. 4. Faux - relire la phrase : "Scargill had refused to hold a ballot on the strike." < Exceptionnellement je t'ai donné la réponse car je reconnais que la question est "tordue", pour ne pas dire "vicieuse" ! 5. Vrai - voir fin ligne 13, premiers tiers ligne 14. 6. Vrai - voir ligne 15. 7. Vrai - voir lignes 15, 16. 8. Vrai - voir lignes 22, 23. 9. Vrai - voir dernière ligne. 3] En te servant des arguments du texte, tu dois expliquer pourquoi on a donné à Margaret Thatcher les sobriquets de "Dame de fer" et de "Tina" pour "There Is No Alternative".
  5. JRB

    Fiche de renseignements

    Bonjour, OK, mais pour ta sécurité et celle de tes proches, j'ai supprimé la pièce jointe de ton premier message car elle contient des données personnelles. À l'avenir, sois plus prudente quand tu postes sur l'internet.
  6. JRB

    Aide pour révision

    Bonjour, Ne sais-tu pas interroger un moteur de recherche ? https://www.cliffsnotes.com/cliffsnotes/subjects/literature/how-do-you-analyze-a-novel https://www.lepetitlitteraire.fr/analyses-litteraires/george-orwell/1984/questionnaire Si les questions proposées te paraissent ne pas suffire, imagines-en d'autres ! Bon courage !
  7. JRB

    Correction texte

    Bonjour, Pour en faciliter la lecture, j'ai fusionné tes 2 messages.
  8. JRB

    Family

    Well again to spell it out, I'm NOT going to write anything in YOUR place.
  9. JRB

    Family

    " Because I have to interview an immigrant family and talk about what type of family they are. I have to do this: by referring to the family models presented in the course, indicate which type of model this family seems to fit (traditional, modern or postmodern). Note that one family may have elements of different models. Explain your point of view. The family that I’m going to present are modern and post modern but the probleme is I don’t know how to start the text. I need some help for ideas." Well, relying on what you learnt in the course and knowing that the family you're going to interview belongs both to the modern and post modern type, what sort of questions are you going to ask them? I suppose you already know how to start an interview, don't you? That's all I can do to help you, I'm no clairvoyant.
  10. JRB

    Help me to correct sentences please

    Hello, Email: We sent emails for to people that are registered on our website. In addition, we request that websites like/such as « 01net.com » or « clubic.com » to talk about our product in their next newsletter that they send by email to their users. < NB : Selon les spécialistes, ces 2 sites ont mauvaise réputation dans le milieu informatique. Social Networks : Thanks to social networks such as Facebook, Linkedin, Twitter, Instagram and You tube, it is easy to discover our products broadcasted on official accounts. Users from these social networks /have the possibility to/can ask questions and community managers from our company will provide them answers/information. < Je suppose. Website : We have an official website that allows us to supply/give informations about our products and sell them. We also have on our website a space dedicated to the user so he could to ask questions and another space one concerning new about our new glasses. < Je suppose encore ! - Do you like our product (or glasses)? - What do you think about our product? - Are you interested by our product? - Which function of our product do you like the most? < En anglais, le point d'interrogation se colle sans espace derrière le dernier mot ; j'ai rectifié. - What price do you want would you prefer? < Le conditionnel présent, dit de politesse, est préférable car moins comminatoire que l'indicatif présent. - What function or improvement do you want would you suggest? < Idem ci-dessus. Slideshow : Glasses multifonction LCO multifunction Glasses < Dans un nom composé, le nom noyau se place après. Description of our company: Name : LCO and Co Founded in 2013 Founded by XXX Located in France (Bretagne) Main products: Television, overhead projector Typical customer: Mostly those who wear glasses Target market: - People who wear glasses - Young people ( 15 - 40 years old) Research techniques to promote our product: Information for market research Results - Profile of respondents - 60% are women - 56% are between 21 and 35 years old - 59% are students - 39% earn less than 1200 € per month - 79% wear glasses and 49% wear them every day - 21% prefer the Chanel brand - 40% prefer the function of the screen connected to the phone - Nearly one in two people prefer a black mount - 28% prefer round glasses - a quarter of people would like to try our glasses - 52% would like to buy our product - Among them, 48% would be ready to pay less than 200 € - 38% would like us to communicate our product using social networks - One in two is satisfied with our product idea NB En anglais, les " : " se collent aussi sans espace derrière le mot précédent ; j'ai rectifié.
  11. JRB

    Family

    Hi, Couldn't you question a search engine? https://www.reference.com/world-view/modern-family-3e0fd3edea218702 https://www.reference.com/family/post-modern-family-f1f8d37aea9fc2ab
  12. JRB

    Entraînement

    Bonjour, À l'avenir, sois plus prévoyante, je ne passe pas 24 h/24 devant mon petit écran ! - What has Alix just discovered about her husband? - What was her husband holding in his hand? - How did she feel? - What did she try to do? - What happened eventually?
  13. JRB

    Compréhension + Expression

  14. JRB

    Compréhension + Expression

    J'ai pu me libérer, ma correction est à présent complète !
  15. JRB

    Compréhension + Expression

    Bonjour, 1) This text is an autobiographical narrative: for to justify this we can take the quoting : " I have never liked to ask" l.2 < pour + infinitif = to + base verbale, c'est à mémoriser. 2)The name charecters are : Buttercup who is was the boarding school zoology teacher of Desmond Morris who is was a shy and quiet student in those days. < les adjectifs devant le nom et le passé puisqu'il évoque ses souvenirs de jeunesse. 3) The five phrases showing how much the narrator admired Buttercup : " He taught (...) subject (l.9) , " And (..) chance " (l12) , "There was (..) charm(l15) , "He was (..) " (l17 -18), " I was (...) before " (l26) . OK 4) According to the narrator the facts that show that Buttercup is was a minor genius are that he taught like no other teacher, he teach taught with a lot of passion and determination. He think he was a real person with strong feelings, eccentrically ingnoring the usual school - master by " from" <??? Tu passes à côté de la réponse. C'était un "génie mineur" tout simplement parce que la zoologie était son sujet de prédilection et que Desmond se passionnait lui aussi pour la zoologie. 5) According to the narrator's opinion, the principale of Buttercup's two faults as a teacher and were the fact that it is impossible to study the zoology , for Buttercup and that the bestvay to learn is was to ask yourself questions about and communicate with oneself. < Tu perds de vue que tu rapportes des évènements passés = >> prétérit. 6) " His unorthodox (..) scientists " , l.9 , " other (..) thinking " l.21 7) A) = False : " the 18 th of September 1941 was my first day away at boarding school" (l26) < Pour être correcte, une phrase exige un verbe. B= True : " , I had never been away from my parents for single " l.29 C= true "we had hardly travelled at all in those lean, despondent times" l.30 D= false : " As an only child, growing up in the depression years of the thirties " l.28 E=false : " my preocupation with my private world of animals had made me increasingly withdrawn" 31. f=true :" i I loathed the idea of going away to school, but my parents were determined that I should have a better education than the local Swindon institutions could "l33 < Attention à cette faute grossière : le pronom sujet de la 1ère personne du singulier ne s'écrit qu'avec le I MAJUSCULE ! g=true : " my father was sufficiently concerned about my attitude " l35 < Si j'excepte les 2 "dérapages" signalés ci-dessus, tes 7 réponses sont correctes. EXPRESSION: 1) I think that believing in yourself oneself is the key to success, otherwise what is the good thing if we do point of not trusting ourselves oneself? < Le pronom indéfini employé, quel qu'il soit, doit être de la même personne. what's the point of + v-ing = à quoi cela peut-il bien servir de + infinitif Yes, the lack of trust being self-confident is very important because it controls us in everyday life and in our private life. < Sois logique ! C'est la confiance en soi qui est importante... etc. Therefore Denis Morris did not lack confidence in himself but ego of he had a rather pyschological field ego, < Si j'ai bien compris ce que tu as voulu dire he is was a rather reserved student that he does not see too much didn't see very clearly what is was happening in front of him. < Tu es dans le récit d'évènements passés = prétérit ! > Nouvelle phrase, S.V.P. ! and So/That is the reason why/ he felt frightened because he is was too reserved and locked up against him. He spent his time with his pets, which can could be a motivation for self-confidence for himself. We could also say that he did not like school, maybe he had the phobia of the school, he needed someone more comfortable by his side, understandably like teachers who could understand his situation to help him for his success may be from what he thinks thought. Eh bien dis donc, te corriger n'est pas une sinécure ! 2) I agree with the fact that a good teacher is someone who teaches you to ask yourself questions because otherwise what is the point of being a teacher? < Là par contre, tu marques un point ! Mais la suite, hélas ! > Teachers teach to educate his their < L'adjectif possessif doit être accordé en nombre avec le possesseur students, accompany < Tu n'as aucun dictionnaire ? them, and mostly they encourage them to give their best of themlike as we can see with Buttercup and all his students like desmond Morris. Buttercup was saying that all he could do was teach them to learn, to make them us proficient at asking ourselves themselves questions. That's the thing that every teacher in this world should say to his students. Discovering new cultures and new people all unique, being curious about how our world works, sharing what we learn and know with everyone, according to me, this is what students have to do to become real people with real feelings with a real personality. A real teacher is not someone who just teaches you, he/she is someone who teaches you to be curious and good with others people. < other est adjectif ici = invariable Tu commets trop de fautes sur des notions de grammaire élémentaire. Fais dès à présent toutes les révisons qui s'imposent en commençant par prendre en compte toutes mes observations, sinon tu cours droit à la catastrophe.
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