Correction Notion Espaces Et Échanges Svp

[kagurasama]

Bonsoir/bonjour , pour mon oral d'anglais je n'ai pas trop de bases pour ce qui est de la forme.

Pouvez vous me donner votre avis et me corriger svp. (pour l'intro je me suis un peu inspiré de ce que j'ai trouvé sur internet)

 

 

 

 I will talk about the notion of spaces and exchanges.

The definition of this notion is the deals with the geographical and symbolic areas that all societies occupy and interaction between men and differents societies.

This notion is very present today because the world is moving and with the technologies we exchange information.

 

We will ask : How exchanges in this modern world contribute to evoltion of our society ?

 

The globalization has positives and negatives impacts.

The right side is freedom.

Indeed, with the advances there are no more borders.

But there is a risk of dependence.

Information among whom we live ingluences our choices.

Advertising are a very good example.

 

With the globalization we are surronded by information like advertising.

Indeed we are in the presence of advertising unintentionally.

Advertising is the promotion of a compagny's products and services.

It's goal is to drice since of the products and service but also to build a brand identity and communicate about chenges or new services to the costumers.

It's essentiel for compagnies, so they devote considerable budgets to advertising.

 

Because there are differents types of pub and there are very well studied.

A good at compain incorporates several types of advertising to get maximum exposure.

Outdoor advertising rich and diverse medium includes bilboardes, bus, stops, sandwich men, and all sorts of signs on walls, cars and tricks.

The television advertising is a popular way to reach large audiences but it's very costly.

The radio it also popular. Many people remember and enjoy radio jingles.

The print advertising includes not only magazine or newspaper ads but also direct mailing. It's distributed in the streets or letter boxes.

The online advertising is an increasingly popular method for promoting the business.

Advertising is growing on the Internet because people spend more and more surfing the web.

There are many new forms of advertising, for example banners ads, pop-up ads, video averlay ads.

In store advertising includes banners or displays that draws attention to the product.

The endorsements advertising is having a product or service endorsed by a celebrity can increase sales and product awareness.

The covert means that a production or a band is, subtly or not, incorporated in a movie, a TV show on a sport even.

 

In conclusion the world change with the news technologies. It affects societies, thoughts, ideas and tastes.

This contantly changing is the result of the globalization.

But every changehas its limits.

[yveslouis]

Bonsoir/bonjour , pour mon oral d'anglais je n'ai pas trop de bases pour ce qui est de la forme.

Pouvez vous me donner votre avis et me corriger svp. (pour l'intro je me suis un peu inspiré de ce que j'ai trouvé sur internet)

 

 

 

 I will talk about the notion of spaces and exchanges.

The definition of this notion is the deals with the geographical and symbolic areas that all societies occupy and interaction between men and differents societies.

This notion is very present today because the world is moving and with the technologies we exchange  (construction) information.

 

We will ask : How exchanges in this modern world contribute to evoltion of our society ? (Revoir la forme interrogative)

 

The globalization has positives and negatives impacts.

The right side is freedom.

Indeed, with the advances (Which ones?) there are no more borders.

But there is a risk of dependence.

Information among whom we live ingluences our choices.

Advertising are a very good example.

 

With the globalization we are surronded  by information like advertising.

Indeed we are in the presence of advertising unintentionally.

Advertising is the promotion of a compagny's products and services.

It's goal is to drice since of the products and service but also to build a brand identity and communicate about chenges or new services to the costumers.

It's (on évite les contractions dans un texte écrit) essentiel for compagnies, so they devote considerable budgets to advertising.

 

Because (à quoi se réfère ce mot ?) there are differents types of pub and there are very well studied.

A good at compain incorporates several types of advertising to get maximum exposure.

Outdoor advertising rich and diverse medium includes bilboardes, bus, stops, sandwich board men, and all sorts of signs on walls, cars and tricks.

The television advertising is a popular way to reach large audiences but it's very costly.

The radio it also popular. Many people remember and enjoy radio jingles.

The print advertising includes not only magazine or newspaper ads but also direct mailing. It's distributed in the streets or letter boxes.

The online advertising is an increasingly popular method for promoting the business.

Advertising is growing on the Internet because people spend more and more (time ?) surfing the web.

There are many new forms of advertising, for example banners ads, pop-up ads, video averlay ads.

In store advertising includes banners or displays that draws attention to the product.

The endorsements advertising is having a product or service endorsed by a celebrity (???) can increase sales and product awareness.

The covert means that a production or a band is, subtly or not, incorporated in a movie, a TV show on a sport even.

 

In conclusion the world change with the news technologies. It affects societies, thoughts, ideas and tastes.

This contantly changing is the result of the globalization.

But every change has its limits.

[kagurasama]

Merci pour votre aide voilà j'ai revu les erreurs et j'ai changer ma problématique.

 

 

 

 

I will talk about the notion of spaces and exchanges.

The definition of this notion is the deals with the geographical and symbolic areas that all societies occupy and interaction between men and differents societies.

This notion is very present today because the world is moving and  we exchange informations with the technologies.

 

We will ask : How trade has an impact on society ?

 

The globalization has positives and negatives impacts.

The right side is freedom.

Indeed, with the advances there are no more borders in differents areas.

But there is a risk of dependence.

Information among whom we live ingluences our choices.

Advertising are a very good example.

 

With the globalization we are surronded  by information like advertising.

Indeed we are in the presence of advertising unintentionally.

Advertising is the promotion of a compagny's products and services.

It's goal is to drice since of the products and service but also to build a brand identity and communicate about chenges or new services to the costumers.

It is essentiel for compagnies, so they devote considerable budgets to advertising.

 

 There are differents types of pub and there are very well studied.

A good at compain incorporates several types of advertising to get maximum exposure.

Outdoor advertising rich and diverse medium includes bilboardes, bus, stops, sandwich board men, and all sorts of signs on walls, cars and tricks.

The television advertising is a popular way to reach large audiences but it's very costly.

The radio it also popular. Many people remember and enjoy radio jingles.

The print advertising includes not only magazine or newspaper ads but also direct mailing. It's distributed in the streets or letter boxes.

The online advertising is an increasingly popular method for promoting the business.

Advertising is growing on the Internet because people spend more and more time  surfing the web.

There are many new forms of advertising, for example banners ads, pop-up ads, video averlay ads.

In store advertising includes banners or displays that draws attention to the product.

The covert means that a production or a band is, subtly or not, incorporated in a movie, a TV show on a sport even.

 

In conclusion the world change with the news technologies. It affects societies, thoughts, ideas and tastes.

This contantly changing is the result of the globalization.

But every change has its limits.