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[Ninh]

Bonjour j'ai fait un text sur une histoire mais  le prolème ces que je ne suis pas du tout sur de la bonne conjugaison des verbes je me perd un peu quand il sagit de mettre des ED ou ING et avec les verbes invariables nan parlons pas 0.0. Alors voila pourrait vous me dire si mon text est correcte? Merci d'avance.

This is the story of Sir Anthony Evans a famous pianist. He talk at Sally Hill a newspaper reporter for the sunday times, his history and Sally said the story of Sir Anthony at us.
When Anthony was little, he called Tony and he wasn't lucky. His family was poor. At 13 years he left school to go work and the only work that he found was in a farm.
One day when he rid the garage with his friends Pip and John ,he found a piano and he played immediately. His friends listened careful ,they found this so beautiful.A little girl called Linda heard Tony too and found this beautiful too. Then Tony ask Mr.Wood the farmer for take this piano. Mr.Wood said the piano is a rubbish then he can take it, but Tony's house was to small now it was the holidays, now he keep the piano on a classroom without permission. Linda who can music showed tony the music.
A nigth a teatcher go at school and suprise Tony but he wasn't angry and listened Tony played and decides to go to the farm talk at Mr.Wood then Tony has skill then he must take lesson with him. This conversation change Tony's life. Some lessons later Tony go at one music competition and mr.Gordon say at him that right now he called Anthony ,Anthony Evans because it's a man's name and Tony a boy's name. Anthony Evans is lucky now ,he win the competition ,be rich and famous and he is married with Linda.

[ineedyou]

This is the story of Sir Anthony Evans, a famous pianist. He talks to Sally Hill a newspaper reporter of the Sunday Times, his history and Sally said the story of Sir Anthony at us.
When Anthony was young, he was called Tony and he wasn't lucky. His family was poor. At 13 years old he left school to go work and the only work that he found was in a farm.
One day when he rid the garage with his friends Pip and John, he found a piano and he played immediately. His friends listened to him carefuly ,they found this so beautiful. A little girl called Linda heard Tony too and found this beautiful too. Then Tony ask Mr.Wood the farmer that he wanted to take this piano. Mr.Wood said the piano is a rubbish then he could take it, but Tony's house was to small now it was the holidays, now he keeps the piano on a classroom without permission.

​ Désolé, je n'ai eu le temps que de corriger la première partie. Je n'ai pas du trouver toutes les fautes mais j'en ai corrigé la plupart, en esperant que ça t'as aidé..

[yveslouis]

Ninh, le 05 décembre 2011 - 18:54, dit :

Bonjour j'ai fait un texte sur une histoire mais  le problème c'est que je ne suis pas du tout sûr de la bonne conjugaison des verbes. Je me perds un peu quand il s'agit de mettre des ED ou ING et avec les verbes invariables nan n'en  parlons pas 0.0. Alors voila pourrait pourriez-vous me dire si mon texte est correcte? Merci d'avance.

Tout d'abord, il faut savoir que le présent de narration n'existe pas en anglais.

This is the story of Sir Anthony Evans a famous pianist. He talked at to Sally Hill a newspaper reporter for the Sunday Times, his history and Sally said told us the story of Sir Anthony (tu peux employer le cas possessif "Sir Anthiny's story" ) at us.
When Anthony was little, he was called Tony and he wasn't lucky. His family was poor. At the age of 13 years he left school to go work and the only work that he found was in a farm.
One day when he rid cleared the garage with his friends Pip and John, (la virgule suit le mot et est suivie d'un espace) he found a piano and he played immediately. His friends listened careful, they found this so beautiful. A little girl called Linda heard Tony too and found this beautiful too. Then Tony asked Mr.Wood the farmer for to/if he could take this piano. Mr.Wood said the piano is a was rubbish then he can could take it, but Tony's house was too small. (nouvelle phrase) Now it was the holidays, now and he keep kept the piano on in a classroom without permission. Linda who can could read/play music showed Tony the how to play music.
A nigth One night a teatcher go at went to school and suprised Tony but he wasn't angry and listened to Tony played playing and he decidesd to go to the farm to talk at tell Mr.Wood then that Tony has skill was talented then he must take lessons with him. This conversation changed Tony's life. Some lessons later Tony go at one went to a music competition and Mr.Gordon say at told him that right now he called would call him Anthony, Anthony Evans because it's was a man's name and Tony a boy's name. Anthony Evans is was lucky now, he win won the competition,  ,be was rich and famous and he is married with Linda. (to marry est transitif direct)