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[Lilliane]

Hello,

Pour mercredi je dois rendre un devoir, pouvez-vous me corrigez s'il vous plait ?

The suerhero it's a girl.
Her name is Supergirl.
It's a journalist when not's a superheroine.
She has 21years old. She likes red and black.
She comes from Mars.
She has got straight black hair, green eyes and a small nose.
She has got a round face.
She is really strong.
She is not very tall and thin.
She is brave and beautiful too.
She has got a black cape.
She wears a red dress.
She has got magic powers: she can fly like a bird, pass between walls, read in the thoughts, she have to abilility to see or hear from several kilometres.


D'avance merci
Lillianne

[yveslouis]

Lilliane, le 21 novembre 2011 - 21:10, dit :

Hello,

Pour mercredi je dois rendre un devoir, pouvez-vous me corrigez s'il vous plait ?

The superhero it's is a girl.
Her name is Supergirl.
It's She is a journalist when she is not's a superheroine.
She has is 21years old. She likes red and black.
She comes from Mars.
She has got straight black hair, green eyes and a small nose.
She has got a round face.
She is really strong.
She is not very tall and thin.
She is brave and beautiful too.
She has got a black cape.
She wears a red dress.
She has got magic powers: she can fly like a bird, pass between through the walls, read in the thoughts, she have to  has the abilility to/can see or hear from several kilometres away.


D'avance merci
Lillianne