Corection D'un Texte Pour Demain

[Lilliane]

Bonjour,

Je sais qu'il est tard mais si vous pouviez me corrigez, je dois passer à l'oral demain, si vous pouviez me dire si c'est correct :

The Jackon are four: the father, he is 48 years old, is an architect, his name is Tony. The mother's name is Shirley, she is 46 years, the job's is Nurse. And their daughter Charlene is 16 years old.

The Jacksons is British. He arrived in Australia July 11, 1992. The Jacksons arrived in Sydney on 21 May 1995.

They have a pet, it is a kangaroo name is Joey. He has two years.

Merci d'avance

Lillianne

[yveslouis]

Bonjour,

Je sais qu'il est tard mais si vous pouviez me corrigez, je dois passer à l'oral demain, si vous pouviez me dire si c'est correct :

The Jackons are four: the father, he is 48 years old, He is an architect, His name is Tony. The mother's name is Shirley, she is 46 years old, the job's is Nurse She is a nurse. And their daughter, Charlene, is 16 years old.

The Jacksons is are British. He They arrived in Australia on July 11, 1992. The Jacksons (revois ces deux phrases car on ne sait plus qui est qui.) arrived in Sydney on 21 May 1995.

They have a pet, it It is a kangaroo. Its name is Joey. He has It is two years old.

Merci d'avance

Lillianne

[Lilliane]

Thank you