joey Posté(e) le 23 mars 2004 Signaler Posté(e) le 23 mars 2004 Bonjour ! J'ai écrit un texte en anglais. Pouvez-vous silvouplait me le corriger si j'ai fait des fautes. Merci d'avance pour votre aide. Voici le texte: ( je sais c'est un peu long mais silvouplait...) 2 hours later, Cutie cames back sees Powell and Donovan with an army of robots. Powell, Donovan as well as all the human beings were takery to a galaxy distant, very distant, the black galaxy! This galaxy was huge! On this galaxy they was only an enormous castle and a factory there to build robots. The humans beings had become the slaves of robots. They were locked into the castle. Cutie was the master, all the robots said: “for your service boss”. In the castle: Donovan: Powell! Cutie said that we were locked with all the human, but I don’t see knights of the galaxy! Powell: Yes you are right! To my opinion they do not know the secret galaxy of the knights! But we are prisoners, we can do nothing. Donovan: I still have my transmitter on me. I will call the captain of the knights and he will come to deliver us. Powell: But you are completely crazy! There are manymore robots than the knights ! Donovan: The knights have powerful weapons, tanks and rockets. Powell: Stop watching TV, you imagine yourself in Starwars. 10 minutes later. Donovan: Listen! I can hear several vessels approaching. Powell: Yes you are right, it should be the captain and the knights! Donovan: I hope they will manage to kill all these robots but it is likely that today is the end of humanity. Humans are fragile contrary to robots that are made of metal, without soul and without heart. Powell: Do not worry! The knights are manyless than these tin cans but they have weapons with a more advanced technology. Donovan: Death to the tin cans! Finally all the robots were killed and the human freed. It was totally unlikely! Humans believed it would be the end of them! They had thought that robots would win while real intelligence beat artificial intelligence. Merci d'avance pour votre aide ! Au revoir.
E-Bahut cixi_lidy Posté(e) le 25 mars 2004 E-Bahut Signaler Posté(e) le 25 mars 2004 2 hours later, Cutie CAME back TO SEE Powell and Donovan with an army of robots. Powell, Donovan as well as all the human being were takery to a galaxy distant, very distant, the black galaxy! This galaxy was huge! On this galaxy thERE was only an enormous castle and a factory FOR MAKE robots. The humans beings had become the slaves of robots. They were locked into the castle. Cutie was the master, all the robots said: “AT yourS serviceS boss”. In the castle: Donovan: Powell! Cutie said that we were locked with all the human, but I don’t see knights of the galaxy! Powell: Yes you are right! my opinion IS THAT they do not know the secret galaxy of the knights! But we are prisoners, we can'T do ANYthing. Donovan: I still have my transmitter on me. I will call the captain of the knights and he will cAme to ESCAPE us. Powell: But you are completely crazy! There are many more robots than the knights ! Donovan: The knights have powerful weapons, tanks and rockets. Powell: Stop watching TV, you ARE IMAGINE THAT YOU ARE IN STAR WARS 10 minutes later. Donovan: Listen! I can hearD several vessels approaching. Powell: Yes you are right, it should be the captain and the knights! Donovan: I hope they will manage to kill all these robots but TODAY IT IS LIKE THE end of humanity. Humans are fragile contrary to robots that are made of metal, without soul and without heart. Powell: DON'T worry! The knights are NOT SO MANY AS these tin cans but they have weapons with a more advanced (MORE EVOLUED j'aurais mis ca)technology. Donovan: Death to the tin cans! Finally all the robots were killed and the human freed. It was totally unlikely! Humans believed it would be the end of them! They had thought that robots would win while real intelligence beat artificial intelligence. sinon voilat, j'ai rein trouvé d'autre. ton text est pas mal. bizz
E-Bahut cixi_lidy Posté(e) le 26 mars 2004 E-Bahut Signaler Posté(e) le 26 mars 2004 oups g laisser passser un truc : YOU ARE IMAGING THAT YOU ARE IN STAR WARS
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