Essay on tourism

[minimina]

Bonjour, 

J'ai un essai à faire en anglais  d'environ 400 mots.  Je trouve  que mon texte part un peu dans tous les sens ! Et je suis loin d'atteindre les 400 mots ..                                                                           Si vous pouviez me donner des conseils et me dire ce que vous en pensez ?                                                             

Voici le sujet :  Tourism has increased so much over the last fifty years that this is having a mainly negative impact on local inhabitants and the environment. However, others claim that this is good for Economy.

 

                                                         Voici ce que j'ai fait  _ 

The tourism is an drive for the world economy.

In a first part  all we can notice that the arrival of international tourists has increased by about 7% in the last 50 years. Europe is the favorite destination for travelers followed by Asia. 

Tourism is today the third largest economic sector in the world, representing an important sector with 2 million jobs.

The government's objective was to exceed the level of 100 million foreign visitors by the year 2020, but due to the current pandemic the tourism economy will have a hard time recovering.

But tourism has not only advantages, cultural heritage is threatened, and some cities are not adapted to tourism.

It damages the quality of local life, especially in Barcelona, Rome or Amsterdam ... due to their success!   The streets and transport are squrcharged, noise pollution, crowded beaches ...

The proliferation of tourist accommodation is leading to an increase in the cost of real estate, or simply the cost of living.

 

Let's take a look at these environmental consequences: 

·         Over-consumption of natural resources

·         Waste polluting nature 

·         Pollution of water with the contents of exemple  sun creams 

·         Destruction of the ecosysteme  Disappearance of biodiversity _ Trafficking of animals, disturbance of species, destruction of vegetation.

Air pollution 

To  conclued , travellers have been paying an environmental charge for air travel for some years now and  the cities overcrowded by tourism are limiting places of worship in order to protect monumentsnscribed on UNESCO's World Heritage List. 

 

?Merci d'avance  pour vos retours ! ?

[Jean B]

Bonsoir,

Il y a 18 heures, minimina a dit :

                                Voici le sujet :  Tourism has increased so much over the last fifty years that this is having a mainly negative impact on local inhabitants and the environment. However, others claim that this is good for Economy.

                                   The Tourism is an drive a driving force for of the world economy. <<Le tourisme / Quel tourisme ? >> le tourisme en général = omission de l'article défini devant un nom employé dans la généralité. C'est une règle grammaticale de base.

In a first part all we can notice is that the arrival of international tourists has increased by about 7% in the last 50 years. Europe is the favorite destination for travelers followed by Asia. 

Tourism is today the third largest economic sector in the world, representing an important sector with 2 million jobs.

The government's objective was to exceed the level of 100 million foreign visitors by the year 2020, but due to the current pandemic the tourism economy will have a hard time recovering.

But tourism has not only advantages, cultural heritage is threatened and some cities are not adapted to tourism.

It damages the quality of local life, especially in Barcelona, Rome or Amsterdam ... due to their success!   The streets and transport are overloaded/surcharged, noise pollution, crowded beaches ...

The proliferation of tourist accommodation is leading to an increase in the cost of real estate, or simply the cost of living.

Let's take a look at these environmental consequences: 

·         Over-consumption of natural resources

·         Waste polluting nature 

·         Pollution of water with the contents of exemple  of sun creams for example

·         Destruction of the ecosystem  Disappearance of biodiversity _ Trafficking of animals, disturbance of species, destruction of vegetation.

Air pollution 

To  conclude, In conclusion, travellers have been paying an environmental charge for air travel for some years now and  the cities overcrowded by tourism are limiting places of worship in order to protect UNESCO's World Heritage Listed monuments. 

Te lire m'a procuré la désagréable impression d'une compilation de phrases relevées ici ou là.

J'espère pour toi que j'ai été victime d'une illusion.

PS Merci de renseigner ta classe actuelle dans ton profil.

 

[minimina]

Je vous remercie,  je vais corriger  tout sa ça et tenter de  trouver  autre chose a à dire   parce que  je n'ai que 220 mots environ.

Et oui c'est sur le tourisme en général.