Conclusion

[tulip12]

Bonjour,

jai besoin de l’aide avec mon conclusion partielle pour ce paragraphe. 

First, happiness helps people reduce stress. In fact, happiness seems to temper the effect of stress and help us recover more quickly. Doing things that people enjoy is also good for our emotional wellbeing. For example, simple activities like watching sports with a friend or going out for a coffee can all improve our day in fighting stress. Also, making healthier choices about our diet can make people feel emotionally strong. People are doing something positive for themselves to have a happy life. For instance, happy people likely take better care of themselves and choose healthier behaviours like eating well, exercising and getting better sleep. 

[Jean B]

Bonjour,

Il y a 5 heures, Itsme17 a dit :

Bonjour,

J'ai besoin de l’aide avec mon ma conclusion partielle pour ce paragraphe. 

First, happiness helps people to reduce stress. In fact, happiness seems to temper the effect of stress and help < Le sujet est singulier, donc ? >> Vois ta première phrase. us to recover more quickly. Doing things that people enjoy is also good for our emotional well-being. For example, simple activities like watching sports with a friend or going out for a coffee can all improve our day in fighting stress. Also, making healthier choices about our diet can make people feel emotionally strong. People are doing something positive for themselves to have a happy life. For instance, happy people likely take better care of themselves and choose healthier behaviours like eating well, exercising and getting better sleep. 

Good job!

[tulip12]

Il y a 2 heures, JRB a dit :

Bonjour,

Good job!

Je n’ai pas fini ma paragraphe. J’ai besoin une conclusion partielle pour ce paragraphe.