Écrire une lettre de travailleur social

[kora kora ♥]

imagine you are social worker write a letter to Danny

mon travail perso: 

Hello Danny 

Vous pouvez me corriger si j'ai des fautes ou bien me préciser 
I write you this letter because I am very affected for your situation that you are abandonéepar your family and that you find yourself in the middle of the street and you are without defend ca should be really complicated for youBut know that he(it) is to advise(recommend) that you are in home(foyer) for your own good to be do not discourage you young man I would be at your disposal at the quite moment

He(It) is not to advise(recommend) that kept silent rest outside it is really dangerous he can arrive at you that we are it

As I told you previously you to contact me I make you a big cuddle

voilà le résumée du texte 

danny is 17 and has been sleeping on the streets for eight months . His parents threw him out last year and he made straight for london thinking life would be easier there he has stayed in a couple of hostels but finds it hard to deal with their rules and prefers to doss down in a doorway . I don't want to stay in a hostel because they say you have to be in at a certain time and that's just not on he said. The government shoudn't force people to go into hostels if they dont't want to . I've seen loads of empty buildings that have been boarded up and they should let homeless people stay in them while they decide what to do with it the building . He says he prefers the freedom of being on the streets and talks to passing tourists for company.At the tube station a few yards further down, Richard , 27 , is sitting cross- legged on a dirty blue sleeping bag and asking passers-by for spare change. He has been slepping rough for 11 years and says he would find it hard to return o a normal life 
when i first came to london i found work and lived in squats but i got into drugs and every time i got a job i made a mess of it and had to leave. Now i just sleep in the street . The hostels are dirty ; there are three or four people in a room and the staff really look down on you. The rules are bad enough but why should these people make you feel inferior just because you are homeless? if they force people to stay in hostels it will be like sending them to prison. But Andy , 33 , who is selling the big issue on hungerford bridge thinks that the number of hostels should be expanded.I have been sleeping on the streets for the last few weeks but is awful. I have just come out of hospital after being stabbed in the leg and someone tried to slash my wrist before that. It is frightening out on the streets , but if they could clean up the hostels and make them safe places then it would be a good idea . The question  is , can they do that?

Je m'en excuse pour la photo je suis pas pro dans ca

Point n'est besoin d'être expert pour positionner un document correctement sur la vitre du scanner !

[Jean B]

Bonjour, pour commencer !

Ce mot ne fait donc pas partie de ton vocabulaire ?

Quel est l'énoncé précis de ton travail ? Est-ce le rapport entre le titre que tu as choisi et le texte ?

Dernière remarque : je doute que tu sois encore en Cinquième, donc rectifie ton profil.

Enfin, rectifie également l'orthographe de Bordeaux.

[kora kora ♥]

imagine you are social worker write a letter to Danny <-- énonce du travail  à faire 

c'est le prof à marquer en disant d'écrire Imaginez que vous êtes l'assistant social écrivent une lettre à Danny

et de dire nos émotions face à cette lettre que danny à pu survecu

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attendez j'ai le complet j'avais oublier de marquer

voici : imagine you 're a social worker who deals with homeless people

write a letter to danny tell him why you're worried about him and give him some advice

[Jean B]

mon travail perso: 

Hello Dear Danny, < Tu ne l'interpelles pas dans la rue, tu lui écris une lettre qui commence toujours par "Dear".

Vous pouvez me corriger si j'ai des fautes ou bien me préciser 
I write you this letter because < Inutile I am very affected worried for about your situation: that you are abandonéepar have been abandoned by your family and that you find yourself in the middle of are now unprotected on the streets. and you are without defend ca should be really complicated for you But know that he (it) is to advise (recommend) that you are in home(foyer) It would be better/safer for your own good to sleep in a hostel. be do not discourage you Don't lose heart young man, I would will always be at your disposal at the quite moment any time.

He(It) is not to I advise/recommend you that kept silent rest not to stay outside because it is really dangerous, he you can arrive at you that we are it get into serious trouble.

As I told you previously, you to can contact me I make you a big cuddle for help any time.

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[kora kora ♥]

Pourquoi en septembre il sera trop tard ? 

Oui, je vais m'y mettre.

[Jean B]

Il y a 1 heure, kora kora ♥ a dit :

Pourquoi en septembre il sera trop tard ?

Tout simplement parce que, sauf accident extraordinaire, tu entreras en Première et que tu n'auras plus le temps de te mettre au niveau si tu ne l'as pas fait avant la fin de la classe de Seconde.

Tu piges ?

[kora kora ♥]

Okay thanks