Correction d'un petit texte sur Noël

[diline]

Bonjour,

Je me demandais si quelqu'un voulais bien prendre quelques minutes afin de corriger les erreurs.
Merci d'avance,

'' Christmas is celebrated on the night of December 24th to 25th. It is a magical period. During this period, the streets and shop windows of the towns are decorated from the beginning of December. Children have the pleasure of decorating the Christmas tree with balls and garlands of different colors and preparing the crib of Christmas.They will discover at the foot of the treee, their gifts. The Christmas meal is something festive where you get the family. There are christmas markets where children can meet Father Christmas, take a picture with him or give him the letter of the gifts they want. A midnight mass can be celebrated.

Thanks to this period, Christmas brings dreams and magic to the little ones as well as the big ones."

[Jean B]

 

Bonjour,

Il y a 5 heures, diline a dit :

Bonjour,

Je me demandais si quelqu'un voulaist bien prendre quelques minutes afin de corriger les erreurs.
Merci d'avance,

'' Christmas is celebrated on the night of December 24th to 25th. It is a magical period. During this period, the streets and shop windows of the towns are << antériorité >> have been decorated from as far back as the beginning of December. Children have the pleasure of decorating << Ce n'est pas vraiment faux mais ça sonne trop le français are pleased to decorate the Christmas tree with balls and garlands of different various colors and prepare the Christmas crib of Christmas. << nom composé They will discover their gifts at the foot of the treee, their gifts. << Il ne faut pas séparer le COD du verbe. The Christmas meal is something a festive moment where you get when the family get together. << 1° Le repas est un moment, pas quelque chose ni un lieu 2° family est un nom de sens collectif = verbe au pluriel // get together = se rassembler There are Christmas markets where children can meet Father Christmas, take a picture with him or give him the letter of the gifts they want. A midnight mass can be celebrated.

Thanks to this period, Christmas brings dreams and magic to the little ones as well as the big ones adults/grown-ups."

Quand tu écris en anglais, OUBLIE le français !

[diline]

Merci beaucoup