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[lili33331]

Bonjour, je dois faire un fiche de lecture sur un livre et certaines parties en anglais comme par exemple le résumé et je ne sais pas si c'est juste ou pas:

Indignation is about a sophomore who is named Marcus Messner. He sutied in Robert Treat for one year but he left it because of the constant monitoring of his father who didn’t trust him. So, Marcus decided to go on another university whose is called Winesburg situated in the Ohio. The probleme is that Marcus is failing at integrating him : he changed twice bedroom because he was on very poor terms with his roommates; he didn’t want to go on a fraternity because he didn’t believe on fraternities. He wanted to stay “unaffiliated”. One day, he met a girl who is named Olivia Hutton. He invited her to go whit him at a restaurant whose is called l’Escargot.

Sonny Cottler invited him to go on his fraternity to slept on night. But, during this night, Marcus and the members of the fraternity decided to go messing in the bedrooms of the girl. Marcus was removed of the institution so he had to fight in the Korean War and he died. Olivia had a breakdown. Marcus’s father died because of a cut on his abdomen. Marcus’s mother lived 100 years ago.

 

6- I think that the musical tone is dramatic because of the end. Marcus go to war in Korea and he died. His relationship with Olivia hasn’t progressed because she had a depression and Marcus was removed of the institution. But I don’t think that the musical tone is romantic because the relationship between Olivia n=and Marcus is not romantic. Moreover, the life of Marcus is dramatic because he has many problems (with his parents, roommates…).
 

Pourriez-vous me dire si mon texte est juste ?

 

Merci d'avance pour vos réponses.

[Jean B]

Bonjour,

Étant donné que tu ne donnes pas le texte original, comment peut-on te dire si ton résumé tient la route ? Dans une boule de cristal ?

 

Il y a 23 heures, lili33331 a dit :

Bonjour, je dois faire un fiche de lecture sur un livre et certaines parties en anglais comme par exemple le résumé et je ne sais pas si c'est juste ou pas:

Indignation is about a sophomore who is named Marcus Messner. He studied in at Robert Treat for one year but he left it because of the constant monitoring of his father who didn’t trust him. So Marcus decided to go on to another university whose which is called Winesburg situated in the Ohio. The probleme is that Marcus is failing at integrating him failed admission: he changed moved twice into a new bedroom because he was on very poor terms with his roommates; he didn’t want to go on a fraternity because he didn’t believe on fraternities. He wanted to stay “unaffiliated”. One day, he met a girl who is named Olivia Hutton. He invited her to go whit him at a restaurant whose which is called l’Escargot.<<whose ne s'emploie pas à toutes les sauces ! Révise ta grammaire.

Sonny Cottler invited him to go on his fraternity to slept sleep one <<? night. But during the / this night, Marcus and the members of the fraternity decided to go messing in the girls bedrooms of the girl. Marcus was removed of <<Utilise le dictionnaire intelligemment>> sacked / dismissed from the institution so he had to fight in the Korean War and he died. Olivia had a breakdown. Marcus’s father died because of a cut on his abdomen. Marcus’s mother lived 100 years ago.

 

6- I think that the tone of the musical is tragic / dramatic because of the end. Marcus go went to war in Korea and he died. His relationship with Olivia hasn’t progressed didn't develop / evolve because she had a suffered from depression / had a (nervous) breakdown and Marcus was removed of sacked from the institution. But I don’t think that the tone of the musical is romantic because the relationship between Olivia n=and Marcus is was not romantic.<<Monsieur de Lapalisse ne l'aurait pas mieux dit.  Moreover, the life of Marcus is <<N'est-il pas mort en Corée ? >> was dramatic because he has had many problems (with his parents, roommates…).

Pourriez-vous me dire si mon texte est juste ? <<Relis mon premier commentaire en haut de page.

NB Le récit d'un évènement passé, coupé du présent, doit se faire au prétérit. C'est à mémoriser et à appliquer.

Par ailleurs, tu as tout intérêt à faire de sérieuses révisions de tes connaissances de grammaire.

Merci d'avance pour vos réponses.

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