Discours Trump/Clinton.

[psychedelicc]

Bonjour à tous! J'ai écris un petit discours, où l' on devait crée un discours entre Trump et Clinton où l'un deux mentait. Si vous pouviez corriger mes fautes ce serait super! Merci

 

T: I'm very transparent on my situation, on my program. The media and the Clan pro Clinton say that I lie, but onlu because they don't want that become a great president..!

C: Stop..Let me stop you right there, Trump. You transparent? It's a bad joke? Let me telle the truth to the Americans peoples. Since 1976, all the main candidates for the us presidency make public their tax notice, except you. Why Mr.Trump refuses to publish his tax return? He answers, by lying once again, it does not concern us. But, you are wrong. I think, that it concerns all the Americans, to know that a billionaire grazes very few tawes, while millions peoples in middle and low incomes fight everyday to pay them. Where is the fairness? A man who doesn't his citizen's duty, dares to put up a candidate?

T: The clinton administration lies non-stop, but behind there are really no real ideas behind your speculations. I have to had nothing. I'm a model citizen? End of story.

C: Can you prove what you're saying? You accuse me of lying return, because you have no arguments to defend yourself, to escape you in your faults, by accusing me. But it's you who lie to all the Americans, every times. For example, in the first debate, you pronounced more than thirty lies in one hour and half. If you lie so much on your program electoral, how is finish if you become president? You are the presidential candidate the most dangerous of the American history. 

 

(Si vous avez d'autres arguments pour montrer que Trump ment j'suis preneuse!)

 

[Jean B]

Bonjour,

Bonjour à tous! J'ai écris un petit discours, où l' On devait créer / écrire un discours entre Trump et Clinton où l'un deux mentait. Si vous pouviez corriger mes fautes ce serait super! Merci

NB À l'avenir, merci d'éviter le bleu qui me sert pour les corrections.

 

T: I'm very transparent on my situation, on my program.<<Difficile d'être plus transparent que transparent, non ?  The media and the Clan pro Clinton clan say that I lie, but only because they don't want that me to become a great president..!

- Dans un nom composé, celui qui qualifie l'autre et a donc valeur d'adjectif se place naturellement DEVANT.

- vouloir que qqn fasse qqch = to want sb to do sth, c'est la proposition infinitive, c'est à savoir et à appliquer.

C: Stop..Let me stop you right there, Trump. You transparent? It's a bad joke? Let me telle the truth to the Americans  peoples.<<Hou là, la vilaine faute impardonnable ! L'adjectif est INVARIABLE. Quant à people, c'est un PLURIEL sans " s ". Il ne prend -rarement- le " s " que dans le sens de nations / races, et encore. Since 1976, all the main candidates for the us<<Ce n'est pas la même chose !>> US presidency make public have made their tax notice public, except you.<<Revoir l'emploi du present perfect avec since. Why does Mr.Trump refuses to publish his tax return?<<Revoir aussi la forme interrogative  He answers, by lying once again, it does not concern us. But, you are wrong. I think, that it concerns all the Americans, to know that a billionaire grazes very few taxes, <<Relis-toi ! while millions of peoples in with middle and low incomes fight everyday to pay them. Where is the fairness? A man who doesn't his citizen's duty, dares to put up a candidate?<<Cette phrase n'a aucun sens.

T: The clinton administration lies non-stop, but behind there are really no real ideas behind your speculations. I have to had nothing.<<??? I'm a model citizen? End of story.

C: Can you prove what you're saying? You accuse <<La forme continue, SVP me of lying return,<<??? because you have no arguments to defend yourself, to escape you in your faults,<<??? by accusing me. But it's you who lie to all the Americans, every times. For example, in the first debate, you pronounced more than thirty lies in one hour and a half. If you lie so much on your program electoral,<<La place de l'adjectif ? how is finish<<??? if you become president? You are the presidential candidate the most dangerous <<idem of the American history. 

(Si vous avez d'autres arguments pour montrer que Trump ment j'suis preneuse!)

NB Les <<??? après un ou plusieurs élément(s) en rouge signalent mon incompréhension. C'est donc à reformuler.

Sauf erreur, tu as écrit ça d'abord en français pour ensuite le " traduire ", ce qui est la pire méthode qui soit. Même si ça te paraît difficile, efforce-toi de penser et d'écrire directement en anglais en mobilisant tes connaissances grammaticales et lexicales et en t'aidant bien sûr de ta grammaire et de ton dictionnaire. Le résultat, même entaché de fautes, sera toujours plus authentique qu'un texte écrit en français et forcément mal rendu en anglais. Qui plus est, cela te fera gagner un temps précieux pour te relire le jour de l'écrit du bac.

Une fois les corrections faites, n'hésite pas à revenir pour vérification. Bon travail !

[j31]

Only one of them lies? "Is this a bad joke"? Good trump imitation though

[Jean B]

Il y a 16 heures, j31 a dit :

Only one of them lies? "Is this a bad joke"? Good Trump imitation though

ha, ha!