Urgent pour demain svp

[anna75]

Bonjour je voudrais  savoir si mon texte en anglais est correcte sinon pouvais vous me corrigée svp.

Hello,I am going you present Calvin and Hobbes .

In picture 1, Calvin asks for some money because his father wants That he pick up of the stiks and fallen branches .

In picture 2, His father gives him one dollar but Calvin doesn't want because it's not many for him.

In picture 3, His father doesn't want to give to him more because Calvin has to obey his parents.

In picture 4, Calvin decides to make the work for a dollars because he knows that his father will not have a change of mind. In the BD Calvin is a little americain boy . He is an only child, living alone with his parents. He is dreamy and is lazy but he is not sociable and he is not interested in the school. He prefers staying alone watching TV because he has not friends . His neighbour is a girl is he cannot support her .Unlike has he she is the best of the class and is proud of it. Calvin triés to play stupid tricks on her who fails. Calvin considers his cuddy toy as his big brother . It's a tiger, Hobbes .When calvin is alone he speaks to him. They live the most amazing adventures to gether. Most of them being imaginary . Calvin is only a little boy who prefers living in his dreams,that in the reality.

S'il vous plaît aider moi .

[Jean B]

 

Bonsoir,

Le 10/04/2016 at 19:51, anna75 a dit :

Bonjour je voudrais  savoir si mon texte en anglais est correcte. Sinon, pouvaisez-vous me corrigéeer svp SVP ? < Si ton anglais est aussi mauvais que ton français, je vais devoir m'armer d'une double dose de courage !

Hello, I am going you  to present Calvin and Hobbes to you.

In picture 1, Calvin asks for some money because his father wants That he him to pick up of the sticks and fallen branches.

In picture 2, His father gives him one dollar but Calvin refuses it / doesn't want accept it because it's not many much for him.

In picture 3, His father doesn't want to give to him more because Calvin has to obey his parents.

In picture 4, Calvin decides to make do the work for one / a dollars because he knows that his father will not have a change of his mind. In the BD  comic strip Calvin is a little American boy. He is an only child, living alone with his parents. He is dreamy and is lazy but he is not sociable and he is not interested in the school. He prefers staying alone watching TV because he has not friends. His neighbour is a girl, is he cannot support put up with her. Unlike has he <Ça pue le traducteur, attention ! him she is the best pupil of in the class and is proud of it. Calvin tries to play stupid tricks on her who which fails. Calvin considers his cuddly toy as his big brother. It's a tiger, Hobbes. When Calvin is alone he speaks to him. They live the most amazing adventures together, most of them being imaginary. Calvin is only a little boy who prefers living in his dreams that than in the reality.

S'il vous plaît aiderz-moi .

Persuade-toi que tu ne feras aucun progrès avec google traduction ou tout autre logiciel de traduction en ligne. Revois les bases grammaticales que tu n'a pas acquises au collège, en première il sera trop tard. Enfin, évite de mettre un titre tel que " urgent pour demain svp " car il ne renseigne rien sur le contenu du sujet  et c'est le meilleur moyen de dissuader quiconque de t'apporter son aide. Au contraire, sois plus prévoyante et choisis un titre évocateur.