Correction d'une lettre

[Lebailly]

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I’m sorry I haven’t written for so long. I hope you are well. My trip is going great America is a beautiful country. We have been in New York for two weeks and we have done millions of exciting things with Marry Lou. We have met a lot of interesting people and we have made some new friends. We have visited Metropolitan Museum of Art, Central Park and Statue of Liberty. Tomorrow we leave for Cuba, we have found a family for hosting us. Cuba is a quaint town with lots of charm. I look forward to visit. Then we will go to Rio de Janeiro, a friend told us that in less than one month will be the carnival and I dream to go there. Then we leave for Miami on February 20, we'll stay a little while with a rather rich family, I think I would have internet so that we can call. I'll be back in two months, kiss I miss you.

 

[Jean B]

Bonjour,

I’m sorry I haven’t written for so long. I hope you are well. My trip is going great, America is a beautiful country. We have been in New York for two weeks and we have done millions of exciting things with Mary Lou. We have met a lot of interesting people and we have made some new friends. We have visited the Metropolitan Museum of Art, Central Park and the Statue of Liberty. < Ces sites sont uniques = the Tomorrow we leave for Cuba, we have found a family for hosting us. Cuba is a quaint town with a lot of charm. I look forward to visiting it. Then we will go to Rio de Janeiro, a friend told us that in less than one month will be the carnival will take place in less than one month and I dream of going there/I can't wait to go there.< Mauvaise construction : après le relatif "that", on attend sujet + verbe + complément de temps // I can't wait + to + BV = Je suis impatient(e) de + infinitif Then we'll leave for Miami on February 20, we'll stay a little while with a rather rich family, I think I would can have an Internet connection so that we can call each other. I'll be back in two months, kiss(es) / (Lots of) Love, I miss you. < Kiss(es) = Baiser(s) // Lots of love = +/- Grosses bises // Love and kisses = +/- Bisous/Grosses bises. < À toi de voir car j'ignore la nature de ton lien avec ton/ta correspondant(e).

[Lebailly]

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