Biographie

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Bonjour, pouvez-vous me corriger svp la biographie que j'ai écris en anglais:

My heroine is Calamity Jane. Biography of his chilhood: Her name is Martha Jane Canary, known as the of Calamity Jane. She is born on 1 may 1852 in Princeton at Missourii in a peasant older. She learns very early care for herself. Child, she loves to have fun outside and learn to ride horses and happens to dresser the best horse. Her adventurous life: It at 13 during the trip that last five months she participated in the hunt with the men. Her mother Charlotte Canary dies during the trip. The same year the family emigrated again to salt lake city (salt lake city is one of the cities united State capitale of the state of Utah) or her father died in 1868. Began her adventurous life that will make it famous. She joined two years later General George Custer scout in quality (guide,eclaireur). She campaigned the Arizona against native American. It begins to wear clothes of men. She executed dangerous mission is involved in several campaign becomes very gilfed firing. It was during the period scout that she won the nickname, Calamity Jane. Engaged by the General crook she is ordained her to leave with a detachment in wyoming. Party for several days the soldier undergoes encouters Amerindian that she kiled the soldier and other siriously hurt back to the fort captain is injured. She gallops is caught and her officier before she fell from her horse. One cured, the captain told him, Jestingly "I baptize you Calmity Jane, the heroine of the plains". this nickname would have never quits. In 1875, it is part of geological expedition led by professor walter Jenney, the black hills Expedition, it was on this occasion that appears in the press Calamity Jane. It most then join General custer at little big horn. During her trip, she is forced to swim across the platteriver, whereupon she falls sick. She married a brute, William Steers witch whom she has a son little calamity who dies infant, then encounters in 1885 in el paso clinton Burke a texan with whom she finally want to pose. They married in 1887 and gave birth to a daughter, Jessie. Then, the family part in Calorado, where they open a hotel seventeen years after the departure of Martha. His old friends are delighted of seeing her again, some want to put in writing her adventures and others asked her to play. Meantime her husband leaves her. She then participated in several shows. On January 20, 1896, she was hired at Dime Museum in the kohl and Middletor circus in Chicago and Minneapolis of her autobiography. in 1901, she was interned in a house the poor in a New York journalist comes to get her to do it participate in the Pan American Exposition Buffalo but alcoholic and ingestible she was quickly return. She died on 1 August 1903 of pneumonia. Two of his friends transport her body to the city of Deadwood Terry, where members of the black Hills Pioneers society organize prestigious funeral. Dressed in white, placed in a padded coffin, her body is exposed in the back room of a saloon, where all the inhabitants of Deadwood can come to him a last farewell. She is buried in the cimetery of Mount Moriah en Deadwood, next to Wild Bill Hickok, according to her will wild Bill Hickok is a friend of Calamity Jane is she was killed in a ball in the head in a Saloon in Deadwood or of its desire next to her.

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[Jean B]

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Bonjour, pouvez-vous me corriger SVP la biographie que j'ai écriste en anglais:

My heroine is Calamity Jane. Biography of his Her chilhood:< l'adjectif possessif s'accorde en genre avec le possesseur Her name is was Martha Jane Canary, known as the of Calamity Jane.< Comme dirait Georges Brassens, il y a belle lurette qu'elle n'a plus mal aux dents !  She is was born on May 1st, 1852 in Princeton at Missouri in a peasant older family of farmers.< elle est née = she was born, toujours au passé She learns very early learnt how to take care for of herself at a very early age. <Tu fais le récit de la vie d'une personne décédée depuis 112 ans = prétérit. As a child, she loved to have fun outside and learn to ride horses and happened to dresser break in/tame the best horses. Her adventurous life: It At the age of 13 during the trip that last five months she participated in the a five-month long hunt trip with the men. Her mother Charlotte Canary died during the trip. The same year, the family emigrated again to Salt Lake City, (salt lake city is one of the cities united State the capital of (the state of) Utah or where her father died in 1868.

Bon j'arrête là car, sauf erreur totale de ma part, j'ai la très fâcheuse impression de corriger la traduction d'un article Wikipédia faite par un traducteur automatique en ligne. Si je ne me trompe pas, à quoi cela peut-il bien te servir ?  Pour écrire un anglais à peu près intelligible, il faut maîtriser un minimum de grammaire.