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The Great Gatsby is a novel written by the American author Francis Scott Fitzgerald published in 1925. The scene in set during the Roaring Twenties, 20’s. The anti-hero is the main character from fiction novel which didn’t represent certain of characteristic of traditional hero. Some considers the signification of this term as expanse to include an antagonist who, contrary to baddies produces sympathy and an admiration.      We will interesting of the complexity of character Gatsby as an anti-hero.                                                                                       First we will deals with speak about period of prohibition in The Great Gatsby.

 

  Gatsby is a man who has lot of wait. Indeed he would like find back, his young love Daisy. He organizes magnificent and sumptuous parties where everything in the allowed where alcohol flows likes water. Every night, guests are invited to participle at these parties. But in fact he didn’t know people he invites so well. Make an effort he makes to bring back Daisy to him are vain. She didn’t come at any parties. Gatsby is ready to conquer the girl loves, it become sort of pathetic. He finally asks to Nick Carraway. Daisy’s cousin to be a procurer. At the moment to see her again, he runaway and he comes back few minutes later. In this scene, Gatsby looks like at a child anxious, shy person and embarrassed.

 

  The Great Gatsby is set during the prohibition time in United-States. There is a big mystery of the fortune at Gatsby. Nobody people knows him really. Many rumor about him, what he is? Where he comes? Thus, when he was a live people was interesting about his party but at his burial nobody people come from.

 

  Finally, even love of his life escapes him; in spite of attempts to reconquer her, we fail which prove that Gatsby is an anti-hero

 

[Jean B]

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Je dois faire un petit commentaire sur: Gatsby an American anti-hero  

J'aimerais bien que vous me corrigiez mes fautes je dois le rendre demain merci beaucoup

The Great Gatsby is a novel written by the American author Francis Scott Fitzgerald published in 1925. The scene in set during the Roaring Twenties, 20’s. The anti-hero is the main character from a fiction novel which didn’t doesn't represent certain of characteristic of the traditional hero's characteristics.<Sauf erreur, tu fais une généralisation là, non ? >>> présent. Some considers the signification of this term as an expanse extension to include an antagonist who, contrary to baddies, produces sympathy and an admiration.<some = certaines personnes = pluriel We will interesting of I am going to take an interest in/consider the complexity of character Gatsby's character as an anti-hero.  <À moins d'être de souche royale, le "Nous" de majesté ne s'impose pas ! Le présent be going to + BV quand la décision est déjà prise, pas le futur will + BV.                                                                                     First we will deals with speak  I am going to talk/deal about period of the prohibition period in The Great Gatsby.<Le nom composé est bien pratique et très usité en anglais, penses-y.

 

  Gatsby is a man who has lots of wait expectations.<Quel dictionnaire utilises-tu ? Indeed he would like to find back, meet up again with his young youthful love Daisy. He organizes magnificent and sumptuous parties where in which everything in the is allowed where and alcohol alcoholic drinks flow likes water.<Attention à la traduction de notre "où" ainsi qu'à celle de "alcool". Le dictionnaire ? Every night, guests are invited to participle at participate/take part in these parties. But in fact he didn’t doesn't know people he invites so well.<Bien qu'un récit se fasse au prétérit, tu as choisi le présent. Alors pourquoi ce passé tout à coup ? Sois logique jusqu'au bout !  Make an effort Whatever efforts he makes to bring back Daisy to him are vain.  She didn’t doesn't come at to any parties. Gatsby is ready to win/conquer the girl he loves, it becomes sort of pathetic. He finally asks to Nick Carraway, Daisy’s cousin, to be a procurer. At the moment Just as he is about to see her again, he runs away and (he) comes back a few minutes later. In this scene, Gatsby looks like at a an anxious child anxious, a shy person and embarrassed person.<Les adjectifs toujours AVANT le nom !

 

  The Great Gatsby is set during the prohibition time in the United-States. There is a big mystery of the fortune at about Gatsby's fortune.<Ignorerais-tu l'emploi du génitif ? Nobody people  knows him really. There are many rumors about him, what he is who is he?< forme interrogative = pronom interrogatif + do/does/did + sujet + BV, tu l'as normalement appris en sixième au collège. Where he comes does he come from?< Idem Thus, when he was alive people was were interesting interested about in his parties but at his burial nobody people come from came/attended.

 

  Finally, even the love of his life escapes him; in spite of his attempts to reconquer win her back we he fails, which proves that Gatsby is an anti-hero.

Sans vouloir t'offenser, peux-tu me dire l'origine et les raisons de si nombreuses lacunes ? Elles sont d'autant plus dommageables et regrettables que ton analyse est pertinente.

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Merci beaucoup et je m'y prend tard à cause de problèmes personnels je viens de découvrir le site en faisais des recherches. Je n'es jamais été bonne en anglais j'ai énormément de lacunes. Merci beaucoup pour votre aide.