NoctisX55 Posté(e) le 23 septembre 2015 Signaler Posté(e) le 23 septembre 2015 Bonjour,Je souhaiterais que quelqu'un puisse m'aider à corriger mon résumé, s'il vous plaît.Je remercie d'avance ceux ou celles qui prendront le temps de m'aider ! The film "Little Big Man" was made by Arthur PENN in 1970. It takes the form of a testimony of Jack Crabb about the way of life of the Indians and about their genocide. At first the movie begin over a flashback. The family of Jack were attacked by the Pawnees, while they were crossing the Great Plains, everybody except him and his sister Caroline were killed. Afterwards they were saved by an Indians, his name was Shadow that comes in sight. He was a cheyenne brave. But after they had arrived to the Indians's camp, Caroline fled, since she humiliated Old Logde Skins, the chief's tribute. Fortunately Jack was adopted by the tribute and was taught how to hunt, how to use a bow and arrows. But also how to protect his pale skin from the sun and how to ride a horse. Slowly but surely he became a true member of the tribute, homever there were sign of a cultural gap between him and the Indians. Jack had punched an Indian and apologized immediately, which is considered as a humilition. Therefore he unwillingly humiliated a member of the tribute. Finally he received his Indian name "Little Big man", it was inspired of the legend of "Little man", who was a small man but even so he was strong-willed, brave and fearless.
E-Bahut Jean B Posté(e) le 23 septembre 2015 E-Bahut Signaler Posté(e) le 23 septembre 2015 Bonsoir, The film "Little Big Man" was made by Arthur PENN in 1970. It takes the form of an account/a testimony of by Jack Crabb about the way of life of the Indians and about their genocide. At first the movie begins over a flashback. The family of Jack were attacked by the Pawnees while they were crossing the Great Plains, everybody except him and his sister Caroline were killed. Later/Afterwards they were saved by an Indians his whose name was Shadow that comes in sight.<??? He was a Cheyenne brave. But after they had arrived to the Indians's camp, Caroline fled because/since she humiliated Old Logde Skins, the tribe chief's tribute. Fortunately Jack was adopted by the tribute tribe and was taught how to hunt, how to use a bow and arrows. But also how to protect his pale skin from the sun and how to ride a horse. Slowly but surely he became a true member of the tribute, tribe. Nouvelle phrase> Homever there were signs of a cultural gap between him and the Indians. Jack had punched an Indian and apologized immediately, which is considered as a humiliation. Therefore he unwillingly humiliated a member of the tribute tribe. Finally he received his Indian name "Little Big Man", it was inspired of by the legend of "Little man" who was a small man but even so he was strong-willed, brave and fearless. * Il est clair qu'en écrivant "tribut" au lieu de "tribu", le dictionnaire t'induit en erreur ! Écris directement en anglais, sans passer par le français. * Mettre une virgule devant un pronom relatif est une erreur puisque c'est un mot charnière qui relie 2 propositions. Bonne continuation.
NoctisX55 Posté(e) le 24 septembre 2015 Auteur Signaler Posté(e) le 24 septembre 2015 Bonjour,une nouvelle je tiens à vous remercier de votre aide ! Sinon le nom de l'indien est bien "Shadow that comes in sight" ^^, et je pense que l'aide que vous m'avez apporté commence à porter ses fruits !
E-Bahut Jean B Posté(e) le 24 septembre 2015 E-Bahut Signaler Posté(e) le 24 septembre 2015 Bonjour,une nouvelle fois je tiens à vous remercier de votre aide ! Sinon le nom de l'indien est bien "Shadow that comes in sight" ^^, et je pense que l'aide que vous m'avez apporté commence à porter ses fruits ! Dans ce cas, il aurait sans doute fallu mettre 4 traits d'union entre les 5 parties de son nom.
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