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[Baptiste16]

Bonsoir à tous,

Voilà, j'ai un DM d'anglais pour Mardi. Pourriez vous m'aider à voir si j'ai des fautes s'il vous plait ? Cela m'aiderait beaucoup, merci d'avance ^^

Dear Marco,

You have met Giorgio and Vincent, haven’t you ? Well, we’ve just had a meeting with their father, and I must tell you what happened and how I feel about it. The don organized a meeting with Giorgio, Vincent and me to talk aout our futures. Gorgio integrated a business school. It was an obligation, Giorgio couldn’t challenge the Don. To Vincent, he will open te best restaurant of New-York. The don said to Vincent that he will can spend a lot of money. Vincent will must show the French what real food is all about. He will go in cooking school to learn the finances of running such an enterprise. I think it’s very good for him, I am very optimistic. Gorgio will give money at him. Giorgio will be the successor of the Don.

The Don said he loves me a lot. I will live to Las Vegas to manage the Xanadu hôtel, because the Don said Nalene, my wife, can not live in the atmosphere of the Family, she can not be accepted by them. But I think, the real reason is because I was the great hero general of the Clericuzio Family, and if I continued to be « Mayor » of the Bronx Enclave, i would be too powerful for the sons of the Don when the Don no longer lived. (J’ai l’impression que je me suis mélangé dans les temps, je me trompe ?)I don’t angry of this decision because I think it is unfair. But the Don said I will be rich, so I don’t care.

To finish, the Don said we are rich and we no longer have to risk our live to earn our daily bread. I am very happy for that because this means we will all dispappear into the lawful world and enjoy our wealth without fear. So Dante and Croccifixio will live in a lawful world.

I wanted tell you what happened and how I feel about, I hope that everything is going well on your side.

All the best

Your friend, Joseph Pippi De Lena.

[Jean B]

Bonjour,

Dear Marco,

You have met Giorgio and Vincent, haven’t you ? Well, we’ve just had a meeting with their father, and I must tell you what happened and how I feel about it. The don organized a meeting with Giorgio, Vincent and me to talk aout our futures. Giorgio integrated joined a business school. It was an obligation, Giorgio couldn’t challenge the Don. As to/As for Vincent, he will open the best restaurant of in New-York. The don said to told Vincent that he will can spend earn/make a lot of money.<< un modal n'a pas d'infinitif, voyons ! Vincent will must have to show the French what real food is all about. He will go in attend/join a cooking school to learn the finances of running how to run/manage such an enterprise. I think it’s very good for him, I am very optimistic. Gorgio will give him money at him. << mémorise to give sb sth = donner qqch à qqn Giorgio will be the successor of succeed/take over from the Don.

The Don said he loves likes me a lot.<< sinon on pourrait penser que ledit don a des moeurs un peu spéciales... I will live to in Las Vegas to manage the Xanadu hotel because the Don said Nalene, my wife, cannot live in the atmosphere of the Family, she cannot be accepted by them. But I think the real reason is because I was the great general << les adjectifs DEVANT le nom, ...crénom...! hero of the Clericuzio Family and if I continued to be the « Mayor » of the Bronx Enclave, I would be too powerful for the sons of the Don when the Don no longer lived. (J’ai l’impression que je me suis mélangé dans les temps, je me trompe ?)>> Oui I don’t angry of <<??? << être en colère contre qqch/qqn = to be angry/cross with sth/sb this decision because I think it is unfair. But the Don said I will be rich, so I don’t care.

To finish, the Don said we are rich and we no longer have to risk our lives to earn our daily bread. I am very happy for about that because this it means we will all dispappear into the lawful world and enjoy our wealth without fear. So Dante and Croccifixio will live in a lawful world.

I wanted to tell you what happened and how I feel about it, I hope that everything is going well on your side.

All the best

Your friend, Joseph Pippi De Lena.

Conseil du jour : revois à fond formation et emploi des auxiliaires modaux car tu as commis 2 véritables horreurs grammaticales.