ReleveDeMadjid Posté(e) le 7 décembre 2014 Signaler Posté(e) le 7 décembre 2014 SUJET DU DEVOIR --> Tâche intermédiaire : you have just seen this cartoon in the LA times. Post your comment on the newspaper's website. 150 words or plus. You can strike like this : Dear editor in chief, I am writing a comment based on the cartoon that I recently saw in your newspaper. 1- Write about yout reaction, how you felt when you first saw the cartoon What I found (the) most stunning was ... What struck me (the) most was ... 2- Describe the cartoon briefly expressing contrast 3- Explain why you liked it / didn't like it This cartoon made me aware of ... This cartoon made me understand that ... This cartoon opened my eyes on ... This cartoon made me think of ... Utiliser des mots tels que : Whereas ; Unlike to ... ; Contrary to ... ; I'm shocked ; etc etc. Voici l'image sur laquelle on doit parler :http://www.bing.com/images/search?q=danziger+INDONESIA&go=Valider&qs=n&form=QBIR&pq=danziger+indonesia&sc=0-0&sp=-1&sk=&id=FE4588F82614035232F7F750BBF95F821A482B9E&selectedIndex=0#view=detail&id=FE4588F82614035232F7F750BBF95F821A482B9E&selectedIndex=0 OÙ J'EN SUIS DANS MON DEVOIR Dear editor in chief, I am writing a comment based on the cartoon that I recently saw in your newspaper. What I found the most stunning was, contrary to the boy who seems to be quite rich, the girl must be rather poor as she can't afford to buy shoes and What struck me the most was that In Indonesia, poor people work in sweatshops from sunrise to sunset to make this shoes, and american peoples buy this even when they are unemployed. When I saw it, it made me feel sad, angry and shocked : sad for indonesian girl and the people who are in the same conditions, angry for people who lives in developed country because people who lives in the USA or in a country that have not the same conditions with indonesia are not interested, they work not with the same working conditions. The two person are teenagers. The girl work in a sweatshop and we can see that she is tired whereas the boy who seems bored. Contrary to the boy who seems to be quite rich, the girl must be rather poor as she can't afford to buy shoes. Unlike to the boy who is jobless, the girl works day in day out, from sunrise to sunset. Il me manque seulement le 3 et un peu de 2 Modifier
E-Bahut Jean B Posté(e) le 7 décembre 2014 E-Bahut Signaler Posté(e) le 7 décembre 2014 Bonjour, Dear editor in chief, I am writing a comment based on the cartoon that I recently saw in your newspaper. What I found the most stunning was, contrary to the boy who seems to be quite rich, the girl must be rather poor as she can't afford to buy shoes and what struck me the most was that In Indonesia, poor people work in sweatshops from sunrise to sunset to make this these shoes, and American peoples buy this them even when they are unemployed. - this + singulier <---> these + pluriel - Majuscule aux adjectifs et noms de nationalités - people, sans s, est un indénombrable de sens collectif/pluriel = les gens <---> peoples, avec s, prend le sens de peuples When I saw it, it made me feel sad, angry and shocked : sad for the Indonesian girl and the people who are in the same conditions, angry for with people who lives in developed countries.<le sujet people est un pluriel = pas de s au verbe because Nouvelle phrase> People who lives in the USA or in a country that have not the same conditions with as indonesia are not interested, they work not< révise tes bases ! do not work with in the same working conditions. The two persons < 2, n'est-ce pas un pluriel ? are teenagers. The girl work in a sweatshop and we can see that she is tired whereas the boy who seems bored. Contrary to the boy who seems to be quite rich, the girl must be rather poor as she can't afford to buy shoes.<Tu l'as déjà écrit plus haut ! Unlike to the boy who is jobless, the girl works day in day out, from sunrise to sunset. NB 1 Je te laisse le soin de corriger toi-même les bévues signalées par un point d'exclamation. 2 À l'avenir, abstiens-toi de poser un ultimatum horaire dans le titre de ton sujet car c'est le meilleur moyen de dissuader quiconque de te répondre. C'est à toi d'être plus prévoyant en organisant mieux ton emploi du temps. J'ai dû me faire violence pour ouvrir ton sujet. À bon entendeur...
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