Myths And Heroes

[alexandrafoot38]

Bonjour je suis en TS et comment dire je suis... SUPER NUL en anglais ! J ai un peu commencer mon texte pour l oral et j aimerais que l on m aide pour les fautes svp :

The American Dream means that if you work hard, you will have the opportunity to pursue your dreams, to be rich, to be happy or to become someone. It means that you will be able to achieve your greatness, support your family, live without being persecuted, climb the social ladder (= go from rags to riches) , have a good education, have equal opportunities to go to school and be free. With the American dream, the sky the limit and when theres a will, theres a way. Today, Im going to talk about a man, who, for me, reflects perfectly the American dream; its about of Cesar Millan. Cesar Millan is a famous person in the USA who rehabilitates the dogs. Hes the first dog trainer who will arrive to be in the highest stages of the world when the biggest celebrities are passed like Celine Dion and Whitney Houston. But Cesar Millan hadnt an easy process, called the boy-dog in his poor village, the Mexican of 13 years old decided to become the best dog trainer in the world and set his eyes on Hollywood where he dreamed of making a name of Cesar Millan. However, a major obstacle between him and his dreams was the US-Mexican border and the fact that he barely spoke English. He passed a lot of ordeal to arrive at cross the border. Once arrived at the USA, Cesar Millan needed to flee to not go in prison. Like he hadnt money, he slept under a bridge during a few months. He found little jobs to pay his food, he worked in the society for dogs like SPA in France and its like it that began at to do to know his talent with dogs. Then a day, a person of the TV offered him to do an emission and its at this moment that Cesar Millan will become famous with his emission dog whisperer. Finally, Cesar Millan shows that the American dream exists become same with the border and without paper, he succeeded to go in USA and to have a better live. Hes a man who hasnt been started of nothing, who was a poor Mexican and who wanted to just become famous. Hes someone who doesnt drop anything and I think that the expression: when theres a will, theres a way correspond to him. He proves that the will can all to do.

Voila... merci d avance a ceux qui m aideront

[Jean B]

Bonsoir,

Comment se fait-il que tu passes un oral d'anglais si peu de temps après la rentrée ?

Après un début prometteur, () il y a ensuite un si grand nombre de fautes que je ne garantis pas les avoir toutes vues et corrigées. I did my best though!

The American Dream means that if you work hard, you will have the an opportunity to pursue your dreams, to be rich, to be happy or to become someone. It means that you will be able to achieve your greatness,<<<??? support your family, live without being persecuted, climb the social ladder (= go from rags to riches) , have a good education, have equal opportunities to go to school and be free. With the American dream, the sky is the limit and where there’s a will there’s a way. Today, I’m going to talk about a man who for me, perfectly reflects the American dream to me,; its about of I mean Cesar Millan. Cesar Millan is a famous person in the USA who rehabilitates the dogs. He’s the first dog trainer who will arrive to be succeeded in reaching the highest stages position of in the world when the biggest greatest celebrities are passed on the wane like Celine Dion and Whitney Houston. But Cesar Millan hadn’t an easy process career path. As he was called the dog-boy in his poor village, the 13 year-old Mexican decided to become the best dog trainer in the world and set his eyes on Hollywood where he dreamed of making a name of Cesar Millan himself. However there was a major obstacle between him and his dreams, was the US-Mexican border and the fact that he barely spoke English. He passed suffered a lot of ordeals to arrive at manage to cross the border. Once arrived at in the USA, Cesar Millan needed to flee not to go be put in prison. Like As /Since he had no money, he slept under a bridge during a few months. He found got little jobs to pay for his food, he worked in the society for dogs like SPA in France American Society for the Prevention of Cruelty to Animals and its like it that’s the way began at to do to know how his talents with dogs started being recognized. Then a one day, a person of the TV official offered him to do an emission a show/program and its at this is the moment that when Cesar Millan will became famous with his emission as a dog whisperer. Finally, Cesar Millan shows us that the American dream exists become because same although he was confronted with the border obstacle and without lacked identity papers, he succeeded to in going in to the USA and to having a better live. He’s a man who hasnt been started of from nothing, who was a poor Mexican and who just wanted to become famous. He’s someone who doesn’t drop anything give up the struggle and I think that the expression "where there’s a will there’s a way" corresponds to him. He proves that the a will can all to do everything.

[alexandrafoot38]

Merci beaucoup de m avoir repondu ! Pour le debut prometteur c est la prof qui l avait fait haha et non l oral n est pas mtn mais la prof veut qu on fasse deja tout nos textes ! Merci d avoir corriger c est tres gentil parce que je me sens vraiment pas bien avec l anglais j arrive vraiment pas j ai beau ecouter plein de musique regarder des films en anglais et tt bah j arrive pas :\

[Jean B]

Merci d avoir corriger c est tres gentil parce que je me sens vraiment pas bien avec l anglais j arrive vraiment pas j ai beau ecouter plein de musique regarder des films en anglais et tt bah j arrive pas :\

[alexandrafoot38]

Ouai il faudrai vraiment que je travaille ma grammaire mais j ai tellement de lacune que je ne sais pas par ou commencer

[Jean B]

Ouai il faudrai vraiment que je travaille ma grammaire mais j ai tellement de lacune que je ne sais pas par ou commencer

[alexandrafoot38]

Merci beaucoup

[Jean B]

My pleasure!

[alexandrafoot38]

Merci beaucoup