Voyage À L'étranger ( Fautes De Grammaire )

[AyaAb]

Bonsoir, quelqu'un pourrait vérifiez mes fautes d'anglais svp ? :/

The studies in other contry open apportunity to discover new horizon, new culture. It interressing to learn differents way of life. This gives us a bigger oppen-midedness and caraticism sense on way what make in France ( It is diffrent according to contry ).

Then this permit to be bilingue. It is clearer to learn the language is necessary to practice le language, so why not go at the country for speak and listent the language evryday.

In the profesional point learn a language which are diffrent of our ease the hierarchical incluse.

For a futur profesion it permit to acquire a good CV. Indeed the boss hire someone that he have lot of experience, a replet and original CV that someone who make a traditional studies. This last have not anything benefics for the entreprise. And thus the boss will tourn toword someone more atterest of the profesional point.

Go aboard can allow widen the social reseau, that is contact in share capital form.

[BouleDeNeige]

Bonjour,

Il y a plein d'erreurs et en plus il y a des phrases que je ne comprends pas du tout.

Est-ce que tu l'as fais en français? Si oui, peux-tu le poster? Comme ça je comprendrai mieux et je pourrai te le traduire en anglais

Bonne journée.

BouleDeNeige