Pouvez-Vous M'aider Pour Ce Dialogue ?

[noctali]

Bonjour,

J'ai un gros travail à faire à l'école: deux dialogues entre des personnages du livre The Pickwick papers.

Nous devrons les apprendre par coeur.

Voici déjà le premier dialogue que j'ai fait. Soyez indulgent, l'anglais n'est vraiment pas mon fort ! Je me rends compte que c'est aussi un gros travail pour vous et je vous remercie infiniment pour votre aide.

P: What a wonderful day, Sam! I’m glad that you and Mary are now married.

S: It wouldn’t have been possible if you haven’t paid Mrs Bardell damages.

P: Yes, I realized it and it is one of the reasons I decided to pay so that we can all go out this horrible prison.

S: I just want to thank you once again for this. I know that it was difficult to you.

P: Yes, it was a matter of principle for me but only fools never change their minds, is it not?

S: You’re absolutely right. I’m very grateful to you.

P: You’re welcome. It was the best think to do! Otherwise, the bride is very beautiful!

S: Yes, she’s incredibly beautiful, intelligent and so sweet. I’m fond of her.

P: I’m happy for you. Mary is the best things that ever happen to you.

S: Yes, she changes my life! What about you?

P: Me?

S: Are you currently in love?

P: Oh no! I’m too old for this!

S: There is no age for love!

P: Perhaps… But I’ve no time for that. A wife would complicate my life.

S: But love brings so much.

P: It’s your point of view!

S: You will change your mind when you meet your soul mate!

P: I love my life such as it is. I don’t need a wife to be perfectly happy.

S: Perhaps, but you never know what could happen in the future.

P: Absolutely but I would be the first surprised! Otherwise, the marriage ceremony was very emotional.

S: Yes, it’s true. Mr Pickwick, I want to thank you for helping me to organize and to contribute to the marriage. It wouldn’t be so perfect without your help.

P: But it’s normal, you’re the best valet I never had and a trusted friend. You helped me many times.

S: It was my job.

P: Sam, you know that I can’t stay living by Mrs Bardell. I found recently an attractive house in London.

S: Great!!!

P: The house is enormous (?). I would need more than one person to help me.

S: Yes…

P: So, if Mary accept, there is enough place for you, Mary and even some children.

S: Mr. Pickwick, you’re too generous with us. Mary will be so happy! We accept, of course!

P: So, let’s have a drink to celebrate this.

S: What a good idea! Let’s go!

[Jean B]

Bonjour,

Bonjour,

J'ai un gros travail à faire à l'école: deux dialogues entre des personnages du livre The Pickwick papers.

Nous devrons les apprendre par coeur.

Voici déjà le premier dialogue que j'ai fait. Soyez indulgent, l'anglais n'est vraiment pas mon fort ! Je me rends compte que c'est aussi un gros travail pour vous et je vous remercie infiniment pour votre aide.

P: What a wonderful day, Sam! I’m glad that you and Mary are now married.

S: It wouldn’t have been possible if you hadn’t paid Mrs Bardell damages.concordance des temps, pareil qu'en français.

P: Yes, I realized it and it is one of the reasons why I decided to pay so that we could all get out from this horrible prison.

S: I just want to thank you once again for this. I know that it was difficult to you.

P: Yes, it was a matter of principle for me but only fools never change their minds, is it not don't they? Le pronom utilisé dans le "tag" doit respecter le nombre du sujet (fools = pluriel = they)

S: You’re absolutely right. I’m very grateful to you.

P: You’re welcome. It was the best thing to do! Otherwise, the bride is very beautiful! Même si une seule lettre les différencie, ne confonds plus think, le verbe penser/réfléchir et thing, la chose.

S: Yes, she’s incredibly beautiful, intelligent and so sweet. I’m fond of her.

P: I’m happy for you. Mary is the best thing that ever happened to you. concordance encore

S: Yes, she changes my life! What about you?

P: Me?

S: Are you currently in love?

P: Oh no! I’m too old for this!

S: There is no age for love!

P: Perhaps… But I’ve no time for that. A wife would complicate my life.

S: But love brings so much.

P: It’s your point of view!

S: You will change your mind when you meet your soul mate!

P: I love my life such as it is. I don’t need a wife to be perfectly happy.

S: Perhaps, but you never know what could happen in the future.

P: Absolutely but I would be the first surprised! Otherwise, the marriage ceremony was very emotional.

S: Yes, it’s true. Mr Pickwick, I want to thank you for helping me to organize and to contribute to the marriage. It wouldn’t have been so perfect without your help. concordance toujours

P: But it’s normal, you’re the best valet I never had and a trusted friend. You helped me many times. Attention : que j'aie jamais eu n'est pas négatif = ever

S: It was my job.

P: Sam, you know that I can’t stay living by Mrs Bardell. I found recently an attractive house in London.

S: Great!!!

P: The house is very large/ enormous (?). I would need more than one person to help me.

S: Yes…

P: So, if Mary accepts, there is enough place for you, Mary and even some children. Relis-toi toujours !

S: Mr. Pickwick, you’re too generous with us. Mary will be so happy! We accept, of course!

P: So, let’s have a drink to celebrate this.

S: What a good idea! Let’s go!

Après lecture, j'ai l'impression que tu sous-estimes ton talent car ce n'est pas mal du tout.

Bonne continuation.

[noctali]

Bonjour JRB,

Je vous remercie vraiment beaucoup pour votre aide. C'est vraiment très gentil à vous de m'avoir aidé.

Je vois que j'ai un vrai problème avec la concordance des temps et aussi que j'ai fait des fautes vraiment bêtes.

En tout cas merci beaucoup !

Je vous souhaite de belles fêtes de Pâques!