Corriger Fautes

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Bonjour tout le monde,

Pour la rentrée je dois préparer un débat avec 3 personnes, débat dont je suis le journaliste...

Ce débat oppose deux personnes, une personne qui est pour la présence des CCTV cameras en Angleterre et une autre qui est contre la présence de ces dernières.

Voici ce que j'ai écrit:

Hi everyone! Today on BBC news we'll talk about CCTV cameras who for several years invade our streets and other buildings public. On this plate are present Alexiane who is for the presence of CCTV cameras and Melissa who is against the presence of the CCTV cameras.

So, Melissa, tell us why you are against the presence of the CCTV camera.

Yes Melissa, you're right and your arguments are to be taken into account and you Alexiane why are you for the omnipresence of the cameras in U.K ?

This debate between Alexiane and Melissa has been very enriching....

And you dear viewers are you for or against ?

It was Aurélie in live of BBC news.

Pouvez-vous corriger mes fautes ?

Merci d'avance pour votre aide!

[ISeeGhost]

^{Hi (Trop familier pour la BBC) Hello/ Good morning everyone! Today on BBC news we will talk about an interesting subject : CCTV cameras! (who which ) Indeed, for several years these cameras invaded our streets and other buildings public buildings of our country. Our guests today (on this plate our television studio/ programme) are present Alexiane and Melissa. Alexiane is for the presence of CCTV cameras whereas Melissa is against the presence of the CCTV cameras its use.}

^{So, Melissa, tell us why you are against the presence of the CCTV cameras.}

^{Yes Melissa, you're right and your arguments are to should be taken into account and you Alexiane why are you for the omnipresence of the cameras in U.K ?}

^{Thank you everyone, it was a very rewarding debate.}

^{And you dear TV viewers are you for or against ? It's time to choose your side.}

^{It was Aurélie for BBC news.}

And now back to the studio.

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Merci beaucoup!