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Voila ma tache finale qui consistait à un écrire un article avant et après la ségrégation raciale!! Merci de m'aider à corriger les fautes!!

During segregation, personality fought for his country. For exemple: Martin Luther King/Rosa Parks for U.S.A

Nelson Mandela for South Africa

Mahatma Gandhi for India

and they all fought for freedom. But segregation didn't differ each country, it's the same. Observe its characteristics:

Blacks persons was slaves and often prisoners. They were forced work as children. To be transported, blacks were chained up and the were subjected to torture during the trip and they were triangular trade. It was unfair for them. Blacks people couldn't disobey.They were underpaid. They were submissive and they weren't allowed to rebellious. They couldn't go shopping in white shops. The employers want blacks to clean,wash the house. The employers were often inkind, impolite and haughty. Blacks people were badly. Black used to find job in the same business as the xhites but now they no longer find job in the same business as them thanks to the Civil Right Act.Blacks used to walk in white park until the end of segregation. Black didn't used to live because the Jim Crow Laws were unfaire but now the are free and ils ne sont plus esclaves,plus méprisés,plus salient thanks to lincoln qui a abolit l'esclavage, et grace aux résistants qui ont su gardé tête au whites (Rosa Parks)

Voila merci de m'aider

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THROUGOUT HISTORY, During segregation (la ségrégation n'est pas une période de l'histoire), BECAUSE OF RACISM personality SOME PEOPLE (la traduction de ce mot est la personnalité, la façon d'être mais pas une personne connue) DECIDED TO FIGHT for his THEIR RIGHTS IN THEIR OWN country. For exAmple, (Attention ce mot ne s'écrit pas comme en français) WE COULD MENTION Martin Luther King OR Rosa Parks IN / FOR THE U.S.A

Nelson Mandela for South Africa

Mahatma Gandhi for India

They all fought for freedom because all these countries have faced racism. But segregation didn't differ each country, it's the same. Observe its characteristics:

Blacks (Les adjectifs ne prennent pas de S, ils sont invariables!!) BLACK PEOPLE persons (Ce mot ne fait pas naturel) was WERE slaves and often prisoners. They were forced TO work EVEN IF THEY WERE children. To be transported, blacks THE BLACKS were chained up and the were subjected to torture during the RIDE and they were triangular trade (Je ne comprends pas ton idée, en tout cas c'est incorrect car les esclaves ne sont pas le commerce triangulaire!). FOR THEM, it was unfair for them (Si tu le places à la fin cela donne : "il est injuste de leur part" alors que tu souhaites les mettre en victime donc il est préférable de mettre cela en début de phrase). Blacks BLACK people couldn't disobey.They were underpaid. They were submissive and they weren't allowed to rebellious REBEL AGAINST WHITE PEOPLE/ THEIR MASTERS.... They couldn't go shopping in white shops. The employers wantED blacks BLACK PEOPLE OR THE BLACKS to clean,wash the house. The employers were often inkind UNKIND, impolite and Naughty. Blacks BLACK people were badly (C'est un adverbe = gravement) BAD. Black PEOPLE used to find job in the same business as the Whites but now they no longer find job in the same business as them thanks to the Civil Right Act.Blacks (JE NE COMPRENDS PAS TON IDEE NI LE PASSAGE AU PRESENT) used to walk in white park PARKS FOR WHITE PEOPLE until the end of segregation. Black PEOPLE didn't used to live because the Jim Crow Laws were unfaire but now the are free and ils ne sont plus esclaves,plus méprisés,plus salient thanks to lincoln qui a abolit l'esclavage, et grace aux résistants qui ont su gardé tête au whites (Rosa Parks) (FRANCAIS)