tomasi Posté(e) le 15 janvier 2004 Signaler Posté(e) le 15 janvier 2004 J'ai cet essai a faire mais j comprend pas trop ce qu'il faut faire,merci de m'aider. essay : Write one paragraph of about 150 words, not forgetting linkwords (while, althought, when, before, as, ...) for coherence. Are you in favour of such a system ? (safety / terrorism / individual freedom ). Merci d'avance.
icy_blue Posté(e) le 15 janvier 2004 Signaler Posté(e) le 15 janvier 2004 Hi Well you obviously know what a paragraph is so I'll skip the details but to make your text more convincing and for the ideas to follow easily you should use some linking words (les mots de liaisons comme "mais", "pourtant" etc). Your essay gives you some exemples:while, although, when, before, as. So you should try to use them as much as possible. I think in your exercices there was one that talks about a precise system and or there was a text before and this question was extracted from it you should show why are you in favour of such a system (safety system or a terrorism system or an indivual freedom system). Well I don't know if I helped you much but if you need help just make a sign Blue
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