Essay About Motivation In A Firm

[ineedyou]

Bonjour à tous, on nous a demandé d'écrire une courte lettre de motivation (ce que nous pourrions apporter à une entreprise, nos expériences pro…). Pouvez-vous corriger mes fautes s'il vous plait ? Je vous en serais très reconnaissante =) Merci !!

It is important for me to keep a good corporate image and that’s why, as a professional in your firm, I would stay in a good mood all the time. I would give the best service to every customer in order to make a good atmosphere. Your brand will also bring me a lot. For me, it will be a new professional experience because I would know better about restoration and it's particularly interesting for my professional projects. In the same time, I would like to improve my English level since I aim to speak fluent English. I have already done an internship in France, where I should sold appliances. While two months, I should help the clients for their purchase and give them the best service thanks to my advice and my availability. The clients satisfaction was a leading point in this internship.

[Jean B]

Bonjour,

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